新东方网络课堂托福备考资料:T友写作范文汇总(六)

Have you noticed the increasing number of people going to university aboard year by year? Those who have gotten advanced education in world-famous universities abroad are sharing their knowledge learned from foreign teachers with their native colleagues. To some extent, they have reached certain achievements in all kinds of areas. Generally speaking, when faced with the decision whether to study in a domestic university or receive advanced education abroad, every person has his standpoint and his specific reasons. As far as I am concerned, it is more considerable to study abroad. Afterwards, I will explain my opinions about it.

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First and foremost, universities in my homeland could not provide us satisfactory advanced education in many fields; however, we are able to gain it from a top college abroad instead. To take the aviation industry as an example（这个是我从twe完全手册上抄的，这里好多怪怪的东西都是我囫囵吞枣弄出来的。大虾的意见是保守点好还是多些花样好？）, universities in China usually do few researches or fail to perform intensive studies in this area; in sharp contrast, some colleges in Canada cooperate with international aviation organizations such as IATA & ICAO（如果用全称就很长了，整个句子的结构会打乱阿...） and engage in a lot of researches in aviation. As a consequence, it is rather useful for some people to take a further study abroad.

Admittedly, it is arbitrary to judge the advantages of choosing a foreign university to study only according to the excuse I mentioned above. In fact, there is a more reasonable point to consider, that is, we will not only study in a foreign university, but also live in another country. To take the idea further, we can broaden our field of vision as well as (能不能连接动词阿？) experience a distinctive life. For one thing, it is convenient for us to live, talk, study and travel with people from varieties of countries. In other words, we will have the chance to touch(谢谢！我一直想不出好词) another culture, which may be a valuable experience for a youngster. Besides this, we are able to enjoy the beautiful scene which may be widely divergent from one country to another. In some sense, this kind of experience endows a person with cherishable fortune.

Beyond these obvious reasons, there lies a subtle cause that is usually ignored. Briefly speaking, the environment of a foreign university is similar to a small foreign society, where we can warm up for our career. Granted that if one has spent nearly most of his time in a mountain area, how shocked he would be when he was put into a modern society. Although it is an extreme instance, we can also image the difficulty an indigenous businessman might face when he works with his foreign partners. To be frank, it is not only an obstacle of language but also a huge gap between ideas and cultures. On that account, it seems crucial for somebody to understand foreigners and make himself understood by foreign people if his career is closely related with that country.

In a word, to study abroad has a clear edge on the opposite, which involves better education, divergent culture background and greater preparation for one’s career. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that to study abroad is a wise choice.

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