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关于政府建设话题的托福作文

2014-8-18 10:24| 发布者: bjangel| 查看: 214| 评论: 0

摘要: 关于政府建设话题的托福作文  大家都知道托福作文需要考生们在复习的时候多看一些托福作文题目,这对于大家积累托福写作素材是很有帮助的,那么针对政府应该花钱建设新建筑还是传统型建筑的话题下面为各位准备了一 ...
关于政府建设话题的托福作文

  大家都知道托福作文需要考生们在复习的时候多看一些托福作文题目,这对于大家积累托福写作素材是很有帮助的,那么针对政府应该花钱建设新建筑还是传统型建筑的话题下面为各位准备了一个不错的材料,希望各位能从中有收获。
  友情提示:该篇托福作文由外教撰写,思维比较发散。
  请考生熟读文章划线短语和句子即可。
  托福作文题目:
  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on new buildings than to preserve historic or traditional buildings and homes.
  托福写作题材之范文:
  From my perspective I have a really hard time agreeing or disagreeing to the above statement, seeing as I respect the fact that historical buildings and homes play an important part in a country’s history. On the other hand, I also believe that we shouldn’t let the past, including historical or traditional buildings, hinder us from developing into a more modern society. 必背句子1
  For this reason I propose that we compromise and try to preserve a certain amount of historical and traditional buildings with a greater sentimental and cultural value.必背句子2 In addition to that I strongly believe that it is wrong to demolish拆除 the ones that were not chosen to be preserved, but provided只要 that they start to fall apart or threaten the safety of the public in any way they should be taken care of.
  That being said, I also think that instead of preserving buildings in several places the government could try to focus on a specific part, that way it would almost feel like going back in time once you enter that part of the city or country. I also believe that this will help improve the general appearance of the city area, seeing as one old building in the middle of several modern buildings look really out of place.不协调
  If we put all of our moral values aside I think that the majority of the general population could relate to the way I think, seeing as people have become accustomed to习惯a certain level of life now. If the government didn’t spend money on new buildings, or on improving new buildings, not many of our homes would have working sewer systems污水处理系统, high speed internet, running water or stable electricity.
  In short, preserving historic and traditional buildings, including homes, is something that should be done to a certain extent. A country’s architecture is a part of the country’s heart. What would China be without the Great Wall and what would Germany be without the medieval city Regensburg?必背句子2 Nevertheless, keeping traditional and cultural value should not come at the expense of a modern society. 必背句子3(355words)
  上面为大家准备的托福写作素材是一篇关于政府应该花钱建设新建筑还是传统型建筑的托福作文题目,大家如果能好好进行准备多积累一些相关题材相信对于以后的托福作文一定会有好处。

 

关于政府建设话题的托福作文的延伸阅读——托福写作高分备考经验

 

  1 避免中式英语:第一个最为显著的问题就是如何避免中式英语,其实我们想说出什么是中式英语,有些难,但是我们可以很明确的知道,托福阅读的文章都是非常地道的英语,因此,我们在看托福阅读的时候,一定总是在思考我们自己会怎么写,这是一个非常重要的过程。

  2 用词准确:比如说affectshock有什么区别?affect只是影响,但是没有幅度上的差别。shock相应的就是很剧烈的影响的含义,这就是用词的准确性。再比如andso有什么差别?

3 动词的名词化:这其实是写出地道托福作文的一个不错的小妙招,就是将动词名词化,因此在这里也将其单独列出。比如说 which of the following was responsible for the evaporation of the Mediterraneans waters?这句话,我们写的时候是不是会将其写成Why did the Mediterraneans waters evaporate?

      


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