托福作文要学会变通 托福作文是一项用于出国的考试,那么如果在托福作文题目中体现出的还是一些中学水平的文段就不太合适了,不过很多人都用惯了一些以前的表达,感觉不太好重新编写,这怎么办呢?下面的托福写作辅导教大家两招改变自己的文章。 托福写作辅导:如何让文章显得有水平 第一,托福作文中要使用不同的词汇 a.使用同义词 比如以下的一些写作高频词汇的同义词,你一定要掌握,出现的尤为频繁。 important→essential, crucial, vital, significant, think→claim, believe, consider, deem, figure out nowadays→currently, at present, now, recently, in recent years, these days b.改变词性 这是一种稍微难一些的方法,要求你的语法基础非常好,你才能灵活自如的运用。 n. → v. Eg:When we look at a comparison between A and B… When we compare A and B… Adj. → n. There are a variety of solutions to the problem. There are various solutions to the problem. c. 使用不同的承接词。 承接词在文章当中的使用相当频繁,不仅是段落和段落的连接,还包括句子和句子的连接。背住一些常用的承接词比你的改写将会有极大的作用。 because of → due to, owing to, because, as, since, for but → however, nevertheless, nonetheless, whereas so → therefore, hence, thus, consequently d.形容词的逆向表达。 在某些形容词上进行修改,会达到非比寻常的效果。 Eg: not as easy as…→more difficult than… Not uncommon→common The cheapest → the least expensive 第二,托福作文题目中使用不同的句型 a. 改变词序。 这是非常简单的一种方法,完全不用动脑筋就可以进行改写。常常将句子中的状语(包括状语从句)换位置。 Eg: For many years, people have believed …. →People believed… for many years. After this programs has been solved, work on … can continue. b. 主动语态和被动语态的互相替换 Eg: Trained scientists performed this research. →This research was performed by trained scientists. c. 使用“there be” 句型 使用“there be” 句型,可以将一个简单句,马上变成一个加入定语从句或者分词的复杂句。Eg: Several computer programs can be used to solve this problem. →There are several computer programs that can be used to solve this problem.或There are several computer programs used to solve this problem. d. 定语从句,分词和插入语的互相替换 Eg: Study…, conducted by sociologists in 2004, shows that… →Study…, which was conducted by sociologists in 2004, shows that… Eg: This…, which is one of the most powerful … in the world, has… →This…, one of the most powerful… in the world, has… 接下来,Cite,即引用。综合写作乃客观写作,只是一个旁观者的角度对这两篇文章的内容进行描述,因此,某观点是出自哪篇文章一定要说清楚。所以,下面的这些句型在综合写作中必不可缺。 a.According to+noun. Eg: According to the passage/lecture/author/professor,… b.Subject+verbs of reporting +that clause Eg: The author tells/reports/suggests/explains/says/argues/states/indicates/claims/points out/thinks/believes that… 或The speaker agrees/disagrees/rejects/disputes/challenges/takes a different view…. c. As is indicated/displayed/illustrated in the passage/lecture,... 最后,Synthesize,也就是连接。具体来讲,就是承接词的使用是相当重要的,将文章当中的重要信息连接起来,体现作者对于两篇文章的理解正确,说明作者的思路清楚。由于综合写作是对两篇文章的比较,所以下面表对比和递进的承接词使用的最频繁。 a.Transitional words showing contrast: however, on the other hand, in contrast, on the contrary b.Transitional words showing addition: moreover, furthermore, in addition, besides, as well 通过上面托福写作辅导的说明可以看出改编自己的托福作文不需要多大的工程,只要一些词语的替换和句子的改变就好了,希望各位以后再碰到托福作文题目时能写出符合自己水平的文章。
托福作文要学会变通的延伸阅读——托福写作高分备考经验 1 避免中式英语:第一个最为显著的问题就是如何避免中式英语,其实我们想说出什么是中式英语,有些难,但是我们可以很明确的知道,托福阅读的文章都是非常地道的英语,因此,我们在看托福阅读的时候,一定总是在思考我们自己会怎么写,这是一个非常重要的过程。 2 用词准确:比如说affect与shock有什么区别?affect只是影响,但是没有幅度上的差别。shock相应的就是很剧烈的影响的含义,这就是用词的准确性。再比如and与so有什么差别? 3 动词的名词化:这其实是写出地道托福作文的一个不错的小妙招,就是将动词名词化,因此在这里也将其单独列出。比如说 which of the following was responsible for the evaporation of the Mediterranean’s waters?这句话,我们写的时候是不是会将其写成Why did the Mediterranean’s waters evaporate?
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