托福写作中的IF从句解析 在写托福作文的时候,希望大家举例的时候能够写实例,因为实例有它的特指性和唯一行,当然,如果实在你没有经历过,在举例虚拟一个场景的时候, if起头,就不要弄错了。 大家在举例的时候常常会这么说“如果………”,”假设………..”,即if……… 先不说这种举例的好还是坏,就本身的句子而言,很多都是有问题的. 总结了一些if的用法,大家考前看看 先看两个托福作文例子: [Scenery]Sue has lost her watch. She think it may be at Ann’s house. SUE: I think I left my watch at your house. Have you seen it? (1) ANN: no, but I’ll have a look when I get home. If I find it, I’ll tell you. If I find…., I’ll…… (2) Ann says: If I found a wallet in the street, I’d take it to the police. If I found……, I’d(=I would)……..(而不是if I find, I’ll…..) 这里两个句子有着不同的意思,前者表示Ann觉得她有找到手表的真实可能性.因此才说if I find….., I’ll….. 而后者是完全不同的情况.在这里Ann没有考虑真实的可能性;她在虚拟这一个托福 作文 情景,并不认为真的可以在街上拣到手表.于是才说:if I found……,I’d…… if I do……….和if I did………的区别 用if+过去式(if I found / if you were / if we didn’t等) 表示虚拟的事情,而不是指过去时间发生的事情: What would you do if you won a million pounds? I don’t really want to go to their party, but I probably will go. They’d be offended if I didn’t go Sarah has decided not to apply for the job. She isn’t really qualified for it, so she probably wouldn’t get it if she applied. If从句中一般不用would: I’d be very frightened if somebody pointed a gun at me.(而非if somebody would point) If I didn’t go to their party, they’d be offended(而非if I wouldn’t go) If …….would可以表示用来请求某人做某事: I would be grateful if you would send me your brochure as soon as possible. “Shall I close the door?” “yes, please, If you would.” Would(‘d) / wouldn’t用于句子的主句(不是if从句) If you took more exercise, you’d (=you would) probably feel healthier. Would you mind if I used your phone? I’m not tired enough to go to bed yet. I wouldn’t sleep. 另外,if引导的条件句也能引起倒装,如果要是在作文里用到,也是一个加分点: 先看正常语序. It would be a serious setback, if the talks were to fail. If you should need more information, please telephone our main office. If Alex had asked, I would have been able to help. 倒装是要省略if it would be a serious setback, were the talks to fail. Should you need more information, please telephone our main office. Had Alex asked, I would have been able to help 倒装句比if-从句更加正式. 但是在否定句里面,不可以用缩写 e.g. Had he not resigned, we should have been forced to sack him(不用hadn’t he…..) 再多说一下,在写托福作文的时候,希望大家举例的时候能够写实例,因为实例有它的特指性和唯一行,当然,如果实在你没有经历过,在举例虚拟一个场景的时候, if起头,就不要弄错了。
托福写作中的IF从句解析的延伸阅读——托福写作高分备考经验 1 避免中式英语:第一个最为显著的问题就是如何避免中式英语,其实我们想说出什么是中式英语,有些难,但是我们可以很明确的知道,托福阅读的文章都是非常地道的英语,因此,我们在看托福阅读的时候,一定总是在思考我们自己会怎么写,这是一个非常重要的过程。 2 用词准确:比如说affect与shock有什么区别?affect只是影响,但是没有幅度上的差别。shock相应的就是很剧烈的影响的含义,这就是用词的准确性。再比如and与so有什么差别? 3 动词的名词化:这其实是写出地道托福作文的一个不错的小妙招,就是将动词名词化,因此在这里也将其单独列出。比如说 which of the following was responsible for the evaporation of the Mediterranean’s waters?这句话,我们写的时候是不是会将其写成Why did the Mediterranean’s waters evaporate?
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