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提升托福写作档次的几个小技巧

2014-4-14 20:29| 发布者: bjangel| 查看: 91| 评论: 0

摘要: 提升托福写作档次的几个小技巧  如何提升托福作文的档次?很多同学都有这样一个体会,托福写作练习到一定程度后,好像停滞不前不在提升了,这也算是所谓的高原反应,那么这种情况写如何再提升托福作文的档次呢?下面 ...
提升托福写作档次的几个小技巧

  如何提升托福作文的档次?很多同学都有这样一个体会,托福写作练习到一定程度后,好像停滞不前不在提升了,这也算是所谓的高原反应,那么这种情况写如何再提升托福作文的档次呢?下面,两全其美网校城小编为大家介绍几个提升档次的托福写作技巧,希望能帮助大家解决这一问题。
  下文中出现的A,B,“……”(某事物),"sb"(somebody), 要在写作中要根据上下文进行适当替换。
  开头:
  When it comes to..., some think...
  There is a public debate today that...
  A is a common way of..., but is it a wise one?
  Recently the problem has been broughtsintosfocus.
  提出观点:
  Now there is a growing awareness that...
  It is time we explore the truth of...
  Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.
  进一步提出观点:
  ...but that is the only part of the history.
  Another equally important aspect is...
  A is but one of the many effects. Another is...
  Besides, other reasons are...
  提出假想例子的方式:
  Suppose that...
  Just imagine what would be like if...
  It is reasonable to expect...
  It is not surprising that...
  举普通例子:
  For example(instance),...
  ... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)
  A good case in point is...
  A particular example for this is...
  引用:
  One of the greatest early writers said ...
  "Knowledge is power", such is the remark of ...
  "...". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
  "...". How often we hear such words like there.
  讲故事(先说故事主体),this story is not rare
  ..., such dilemma we often meet in daily life
  ..., the story still has a realistic significance.
  提出原因:
  There are many reasons for..
  Why ..., for one thing,...
  The answer to this problem involves many factors.
  Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves ...
  The first reason can be obliviously seen.
  Most people would agree that...
  Some people may neglect that in fact ...
  Others suggest that...
  Part of the explanation is ...
  进行对比:
  The advantages for A outweigh the disadvantages of...
  Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...
  Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.
  A maybe ... , but it suffers from the disadvantage that...
  承上启下:
  To understand the truth of..., it is also important to see...
  A study of ... will make this point clear
  让步:
  Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...
  I do not deny that A has its own merits.
  结尾:
  From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...
  In summary, it is wiser...
  In short...
  托福写作结构如何出彩?以上内容并不需要你全部都用上,因为只要用上几种就足以使你的写作成绩提高一个甚至几个档次。大家在练习中不妨都运用下了解更多的表达方式,并不仅仅是为了托福考试,最后两全其美网校城小编祝大家托福考试顺利。

 

提升托福写作档次的几个小技巧的延伸阅读——托福写作高分备考经验

 

  1 避免中式英语:第一个最为显著的问题就是如何避免中式英语,其实我们想说出什么是中式英语,有些难,但是我们可以很明确的知道,托福阅读的文章都是非常地道的英语,因此,我们在看托福阅读的时候,一定总是在思考我们自己会怎么写,这是一个非常重要的过程。

  2 用词准确:比如说affectshock有什么区别?affect只是影响,但是没有幅度上的差别。shock相应的就是很剧烈的影响的含义,这就是用词的准确性。再比如andso有什么差别?

  3 动词的名词化:这其实是写出地道托福作文的一个不错的小妙招,就是将动词名词化,因此在这里也将其单独列出。比如说 which of the following was responsible for the evaporation of the Mediterraneans waters?这句话,我们写的时候是不是会将其写成Why did the Mediterraneans waters evaporate?

  4 习语的使用:习语在托福写作经验当中是一部分,往往是一个地道的写作者与一个中等的写作者之间的很大的差别,虽然有些人在强调幽默在文章当中十分的重要,但是现实情 是,很多人都无法控制自己的文章之中的幽默够准确,因此也就很难去使用幽默了。

5 句式多样化:这其实是我们我们在25分之前没有意识到的问题,我们在此之前总是在努力的将自己的托福作文加入很多的长句,同时也希望将自己的写作多写几十字,但是其实这些东西都是非常无益的。优秀的写作一个很重要的特征就是让人有很强的可读性,也就是让人读下去。

      


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