托福写作一例多用举例介绍

　　托福写作一例多用举例介绍。托福写作的题目形式决定了托福写作有其自己的出题特点，我们根据托福写作的出题特点才能找到复习的重点。做托福写作中举例子是非常关键的，但是大家的例子有限，托福写作出题的范围却无限，那么我们如何才能做到一例多用，用有限应对无限呢?下面以《新托福考试官方指南》上面列有的“托福写作185题题库”为准，向大家做个展示，用一个例子解决20道题目。

　　托福作文范文185 1、请看第89题：If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would you like to meet? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. 如果让你见一位历史名人，你会选择谁?

　　同学们的答案丰富多彩，有选择孔子的，有选择秦始皇的，还有选择武则天、杨贵妃、西施、貂蝉的。其实，这道题我们选择谁都可以，只要符合一个前提：这个人我们熟悉。因为，只有熟悉这个人，我们才能够做到有话可说。好，我们就以孔子为例。于是，我们就写出以下一段文字。

　　Confucius was a Chinese thinker and social philosopher, whose teachings and philosophy have deeply influenced Chinese, Korean, Japanese, Taiwanese and Vietnamese thought and life. His philosophy emphasized personal and governmental morality, correctness of social relationships, justice and sincerity. These values gained prominence in China over other doctrines, such as Legalism or Taoism during the Han Dynasty. Confucius' thoughts have been developed into a system of philosophy known as Confucianism. It was introduced to Europe by the Jesuit Matteo Ricci, who was the first to Latinise the name as "Confucius." His teachings may be found in the Analects of Confucius, a collection of "brief aphoristic fragments", which was compiled many years after his death. Modern historians do not believe that any specific documents can be said to have been written by Confucius, but for nearly 2,000 years he was thought to be the editor or author of all the Five Classics such as the Classic of Rites, and the Spring and Autumn Annals。

　　有了这段文字之后，我们就可以去联系其他的作文题目了。看一看，这个例子能不能用到别的作文题目中去，从而减少我们的写作备考压力，做到“一例多用”。

　　2、请看第86题：If you could go back to some time and place in the past, when and where would you go? Why? 如果让你回到过去的某时某地，你回去何时何地?

　　我们回到春秋时期的鲁国。为什么?因为在那里，我可以见到孔子。于是，上面这段文字，我们就可以用到文章里面去了。

　　3、请看第91题：If you could ask a famous person one question, what would you ask? Why? 如果让你问名人一个问题，你会问什么?

　　首先，这个名人是谁?我们选择孔子。问什么问题?“能不能请你介绍一个你自己?”

　　4、请看第176题：Holidays honor people or events. If you could create a new holiday, what person or event would it honor and how would you want people to celebrate it? 制定一个纪念日，纪念一位名人。

　　我们纪念孔子。

　　5、请看第183题：Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? 通过看电影了解一个国家的什么?

　　我们通过看一部叫做《孔子》电影，了解了中国的伟人孔子。

　　6、请看第26题：It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? 在你家小区里建一家电影院，同不同意?

　　当然同意，因为可以去看一部电影，叫做《孔子》，里面有我最喜欢的伟人孔子。

　　7、请看第79题：Your city has decided to build a statue or monument to honor a famous person in your country. Who would you choose? 建立一座雕像来纪念一位名人，纪念谁?

　　我们纪念孔子。

　　8、请看第149题：Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land? 如果收到一块土地，作什么用?

　　用来建立孔子的雕像。

　　9、请看第147题：Your school has received a gift of money. What do you think is the best way for your school to spend this money? 学校收到一笔钱，作什么用?

　　用来建立孔子的雕像。

　　10、请看第141题：If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make? 改变学校的一个重要方面?

　　我们改变学校的建筑，建立一座孔子的雕像。

　　11、请看第52题：What change would make your hometown more appealing to people your age? 改变家乡的什么来吸引同龄人?

　　建立一座孔子的雕像。

　　12、请看第165题：You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live. What is one thing you will do to improve your community? Why? 做什么事情来改善小区?

　　建立一座孔子的雕像。

　　13、请看第98题：If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose? Why? 送什么东西去参加国际展览?

　　送孔子的雕像。

　　14、请看第28题：A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country. Where should this visitor go on that day? Why? 老外来中国，带他去哪里?

　　带他去看孔子的雕像。

　　15、请看第171题：Imagine that you are preparing for a trip. You plan to be away from your home for a year. In addition to clothing and personal care items, you can take one additional thing. What would you take and why? 出门旅游，带一件随身物品，带什么?

　　看到这里，有的同学会说：“带孔子的雕像!”……不行，太重了。我们带孔子画像，带孔子纪念章，带《论语》。

　　16、请看第142题：A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child's development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? 送给孩子什么礼物?

　　我们送孔子画像，送孔子纪念章，送《论语》。

　　17、请看第19题：If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? 学一门没有学过的学科。学什么?

　　我们学习历史，通过学习历史，学习孔子。

　　18、请看第38题：Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? 学习历史对于我们今天没有价值，同意与否?

　　不同意。我们可以学习历史，学习孔子。

　　19、请看第96题：People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? 减压的方法。

　　我们减压的方法是读书，读孔子的故事。

　　20、请看第116题：People learn in different ways. Some people learn by doing things; other people learn by reading about things; others learn by listening to people talk about things. Which of these methods of learning is best for you? Use specific examples to support your choice。学习有不同的方式，做事情，阅读或者聆听别人的教诲，你更倾向哪个?

　　我们阅读，读孔子的故事。

 

托福写作一例多用举例介绍的延伸阅读——托福写作高分备考经验

 

　　1 避免中式英语：第一个最为显著的问题就是如何避免中式英语，其实我们想说出什么是中式英语，有些难，但是我们可以很明确的知道，托福阅读的文章都是非常地道的英语，因此，我们在看托福阅读的时候，一定总是在思考我们自己会怎么写，这是一个非常重要的过程。

　　2 用词准确：比如说affect与shock有什么区别?affect只是影响，但是没有幅度上的差别。shock相应的就是很剧烈的影响的含义，这就是用词的准确性。再比如and与so有什么差别?

　　3 动词的名词化：这其实是写出地道托福作文的一个不错的小妙招，就是将动词名词化，因此在这里也将其单独列出。比如说 which of the following was responsible for the evaporation of the Mediterranean’s waters?这句话，我们写的时候是不是会将其写成Why did the Mediterranean’s waters evaporate?

　　4 习语的使用：习语在托福写作经验当中是一部分，往往是一个地道的写作者与一个中等的写作者之间的很大的差别，虽然有些人在强调幽默在文章当中十分的重要，但是现实情况是，很多人都无法控制自己的文章之中的幽默够准确，因此也就很难去使用幽默了。

5 句式多样化：这其实是我们我们在25分之前没有意识到的问题，我们在此之前总是在努力的将自己的托福作文加入很多的长句，同时也希望将自己的写作多写几十字，但是其实这些东西都是非常无益的。优秀的写作一个很重要的特征就是让人有很强的可读性，也就是让人读下去。