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托福写作范文之工作环境

2013-11-2 09:00| 发布者: bjangel| 查看: 134| 评论: 0

摘要: 托福写作范文之工作环境  托福写作范文之工作环境。托福写作主要考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握,以及逻辑和结构构架能力,一篇好的托福 写作范文能够帮助同学们抓住托福写作的得分点,并能给大家提供提供高分词汇和 ...
托福写作范文之工作环境

  托福写作范文之工作环境。托福写作主要考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握,以及逻辑和结构构架能力,一篇好的托福 写作范文能够帮助同学们抓住托福写作的得分点,并能给大家提供提供高分词汇和句式。下面,和小编一起来看一下。  [托福写作真题]
  Topic47:你喜欢为大公司工作还是愿意在小公司工作?
  Topic47 Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
  [托福 写作范文之一]
  Topic: 47
  No doubt, I choose to work for a small company because there are too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages not to choose. But working for a large company has advantages no more than its disadvantages.
  The most important benefit of working for a small company is that I will have many chances to develop. In gerneral, a small company is a developing enterprise and it is not easy to absorb many excellent employees. If I enter this small company, I think that the boss will appreciate me and give me many opportunities to reveal my abilities. Only I let the job do well, I am sure that I will rise very rapidly.
  On contrary to this, a large company is already a high developed institutions. There are many prominent talent working for it. A good position will absorb hundreds of opponents. It will take me a lot of time and vigor to get this position. Maybe I have no chance to win this competition at all.
  Another benefit of working for a small company , which working for a large company almost cannot achieve, is that I can learn more skills in a small company than in a large company. As shown above, a small company is a developing enteprise. This means that it have no a great deal of money to employ many persons . So, I can do all kinds of jobs at the same time. I think that this will be useful to compete in the society. But in a large company, maybe I only engage a monotonous job over a long period of time . I believe that this will be helpless to improve my capacity.
  Of course, choosing to work for a large company also has advantages to some extent. For example, it will afford handsome salary and will be not easy to fail in business competition. But from my own development, I still want to work in a small company. In addition, I believe that every large company originates from a small company. Maybe I will become an important person when the small company in which I work become a large company.
  [托福写作范文之二]
  I would prefer to work in a large company rather than a small one. A large company has more to offer in terms of advancement, training, and prestige.
  In a large company, lean start at an entry-level position and work myself up to the top. I could start in the mailroom and, once I know the company, can apply for a managerial position. In a small company, there is not as much room to grow.
  In a large company, there are a variety of jobs. I could work in sales, in marketing, in distribution, in shipping, or in any department I applied for. I could be trained in a variety of positions and would have valuable experience. In a small company, there would not be the same opportunity.
  In a large company, there would be more prestige. I could brag to my friends that I worked for one of the biggest companies in the world. I would always have something to talk about when I met strangers. If I worked for a small company, I would always have to explain what the company did.
  Working for a small company would -not give me the same opportunities for advancement or onthe-job training as working for a larger company would. Nor would I be as proud to work for a small company-unless the small company was my own
  [托福 写作范文之三]
  Some people show special interest in working for a big company, while other are more willing to work for small ones! Of course, every individual has his own opinion about the strengths and weakness when it comes to serving in a big firm or a small one ;for me, my choice is definitely to work for a big company!
  Now let's use the analysis of "SWOT",which was always employed in the field of economics to get the above-said problem sloved! Here, S stands for "strengths",W for "weakness",O for "opportunities" and T for "target"!
  Working for a big company will have many aspects of strengths for your development in your career, because, in my head, a big company usually provides more competitiveness and it demands its employees to be self-educated at the very beginning of becoming one member of the group or he or she will be dismissed without hesitation, for as a big company, there are always a pool of talents waiting for the position which he or she occupied before! Besides, in a big
  company, you will deal with shades of people, who are maybe from different provinces or even different countries, having various education, as well as family background, and so on, in such way you will be inevitably influenced by "multi-culture", regardless of the various cultures of different provinces, or of different nations, which is of great importance for a person with the hope of tailoring himself to be an international talent. Finally, in a big company you will be given more opportunities to be charged up in your free time either at home or abroad and be endowed with more chances to contact with more elites in the specific field or other fields.
  When speaking of the weakness, in my humble opinion, of course, every thing is a double-edged sword, working for a big company might have little chance for those who have little of parts to get out due to the bulk of talents, but compared with strengths and the opportunities mentioned above, it can be omitted, to put it exceedingly!
  When it comes to the target, you, as a member of a big company, you will be more likely to motorize your target because of the plentiful resources including material resources, as well as human resources.
  All that I have said above boils down to the conclusion that if you are a person who craves for competitiveness and desires to be an international or Inter-provincial talent, you should choose the big firms for your future development.
  以上是为您提供的托福作文范文“关于工作环境”,当然我们并不主张考生死记托福写作范文,考试时如果遇到类似题目照搬上去,这并不能考察考生的写作能力。新托福考试写作多背一些范文,可以积累一些素材,像好的短语、词、句等,灵活运用。

 

托福写作范文之工作环境的延伸阅读——托福写作高分备考经验

 

  1 避免中式英语:第一个最为显著的问题就是如何避免中式英语,其实我们想说出什么是中式英语,有些难,但是我们可以很明确的知道,托福阅读的文章都是非常地道的英语,因此,我们在看托福阅读的时候,一定总是在思考我们自己会怎么写,这是一个非常重要的过程。

  2 用词准确:比如说affectshock有什么区别?affect只是影响,但是没有幅度上的差别。shock相应的就是很剧烈的影响的含义,这就是用词的准确性。再比如andso有什么差别?

  3 动词的名词化:这其实是写出地道托福作文的一个不错的小妙招,就是将动词名词化,因此在这里也将其单独列出。比如说 which of the following was responsible for the evaporation of the Mediterraneans waters?这句话,我们写的时候是不是会将其写成Why did the Mediterraneans waters evaporate?

  再比如说As a result of crustal adjustments,我们是不是会说Because the crust adjust。可以说动词的名词化,可以极大的提升我们的写作效率和单位时间内的信息含量,这是一个很重要的技巧!

  4 习语的使用:习语在托福写作经验当中是一部分,往往是一个地道的写作者与一个中等的写作者之间的很大的差别,虽然有些人在强调幽默在文章当中十分的重要,但是现实情况是,很多人都无法控制自己的文章之中的幽默够准确,因此也就很难去使用幽默了。

5 句式多样化:这其实是我们我们在25分之前没有意识到的问题,我们在此之前总是在努力的将自己的托福作文加入很多的长句,同时也希望将自己的写作多写几十字,但是其实这些东西都是非常无益的。优秀的写作一个很重要的特征就是让人有很强的可读性,也就是让人读下去。

   


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