托福写作高分冲关必备：新托福作文考试28分大放送

　　should people sometimes do things that are not enjoyable?

这是我同寝室的一个同学考前模考的，他最后作文部分28

　　Should people sometimes do something that they are not enjoying? Or should they never take part in such activities? As far as I am concerned, I think the first opinion is of more value for things that we do not enjoy are always necessities of our lives.

　　First of all, it goes beyond doubt that doing something that is not enjoyable may be a way to earn ones living. As is known to all, not all people are satisfied with their present career, in other words, they are not so in favour of the work they are doing. According to statistics of a widespread survey over my country, people in notable number, even has the tendency of increasing express that they do it for the simple reason that they have to. They feel obliged to choose that work to make money. For example, the work for a typist is no more than typing before computers, which is of course boring and repeating. Thus, it is a necessity in people's lives.

　　Another compelling reason why I advocate that people should do something they do not enjoy lies in the fact that they can get better trained in unfavorable activities. Participating in such activities gives us a chance to challenge our courage, our patience and our perseverance, which are all crucial qualities we can benefit from a lot later in our life. One need look no further than extreme sports players as examples. Compared to the professionals, they do it to challenge themselves. It is undeniable that these man with extraordinary courage have pushed the human limits to a new level which we can hardly imagine without them. So challenging and dangerous is this kind of sports that anyone who takes part in is a hero, from whatever perspective. It is these experience that make the players outstanding leaders who can undergo adversities in life more bravely instead of retreating shamefully.

　　However, a coin has two sides. Beneficial and necessary as the unenjoyable things may be, its significance should not be exaggerated for it is not without its problems. One of the drawbacks concerns how much of such unenjoyable thing one could stand. As it varies from person to person, there will never be a standard for this. We should carefully control it not to let it disturb our daily life too much to destroy our hope and happiness. In such occasions, unfavorable activities may even be counterproductive.

　　I sum, according to the forgoing discussion, it is safe to draw a conclusion that taking part in activities we do not enjoy is a necessity in our lives. However, considerable though the disadvantages that these unenjoyable things may brings about, they cannot compete with the benefits. Only with such things can we be better prepared for future and really enjoys the fruits of it.

 

托福写作高分冲关必备：新托福作文考试28分大放送的延伸阅读——新托福写作一次通关技巧之无所不能辩

 

　　解决了上一个托福写作问题之后，学生仍然可能会有思绪梗阻的现象。这是极颇正常的。例如，在斗劲A和B的时辰，说了一段撑持A之后发现，意矣闽不雅概念。这个原则我叫做“口角正反说”，或者叫“有利原则”，即一切评价取决于评价者所站立场。

   再想不到撑持A的例子，也先不到否决B的例子，反而想到几个撑持A的例子，甚至是撑持B的例子。凡是如不美观有A+或者B-，文章的结构是斗劲直接浩撇的。但问题就是只有A-和B+的时辰。若何继续撑持A？

　　选择继续撑持A的原因有良多，可能因为前面基调已定无法改削，亦可能所有论点斗劲一下，没有任何一方有压服性优势，撑持A撑持B城市碰着上述问题，即直接可用的论点不足。亦可能是作者主不美观上就是想撑持A即便例子一下想不全。

其解决方案无非有二。其一是坦荡托福考生思绪。确保他们能想到足够多的分论点以供使用。这点可以经由过程万能理由，破题体例，段履睁开等等手段来达到。但我们仍需要年夜其它角度再供给备选方案。方案二就是，若何变废为宝，若何口角倒置。换言之，攻讦你能否不说你的错误谬误，而改为报复你的利益？撑持我是否可以不说我的利益，而转为回嘴我的劣势？这样理论上，无论你想到的论点是A+, A-,B+,B-, 我们都可以用它们来撑持肆。