申请博士后模板

Dear Dr.,

Here I write you this email to apply for a postdoctoral position in your group. I learned about your excellent research and publications in your lab website. And I believing that there would be a good fit between my research experience, interests and your research area, which involved in micro sheet metal forming technology, I am interested in a postdoctoral position upon completion of my Ph.D. degree in *********.

As a graduate student, I have been currently doing research on ******foil for about six years. I have a strong background in theory analysis of ********, and I believe these skills would benefit the research work in micro deep drawing. Enclosed is my C.V. which further outlines my qualifications. Attachment (file named CV-*****. pdf) is in Acrobat PDF format, so if you have any problem in opening it, please let me know and I can send you a hard copy.

I would like to contact you to answer any questions you may have and to see if you need any other information from me. Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,

*****

一点建议，谨供参考讨论
正文第二行 应该为I believe , 不是I believing
第四行currently是不是应该删掉，觉得句子读起来时态怪怪的，完成进行时里没怎么见过用currently作时间副词的，currently一般是说一个时点，或者很短的时间段，已经持续了六年的事情，用currently好象有点不妥
还是这一行theoretical analysis是不是比theory analysis好一点？

一点建议，谨供参考讨论
正文第二行 应该为I believe , 不是I believing
第四行currently是不是应该删掉，觉得句子读起来时态怪怪的，完成进行时里没怎么见过用currently作时间副词的
还是这一行theoretical analysis是不是比theory analysis好一点？

一点建议，谨供参考讨论
正文第二行 应该为I believe , 不是I believing
第四行currently是不是应该删掉， ...
magique 发表于 2010-5-12 10:32

good suggestions