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雅思写作中要避免其他考生常用的词组

2015-7-30 09:58| 发布者: ayawei| 查看: 135| 评论: 0

摘要: 雅思写作中要避免其他考生常用的词组  在雅思写作考试中,如果词组用的得当的话,是会有锦上添花的作用,但是反之,就会影响成绩了,今天我们整理了高分雅思写作需要避免的词组,供考生们参考。   1. a lot of/l ...
雅思写作中要避免其他考生常用的词组

  在雅思写作考试中,如果词组用的得当的话,是会有锦上添花的作用,但是反之,就会影响成绩了,今天我们整理了高分雅思写作需要避免的词组,供考生们参考。

  1. a lot of/lots of

  这对词组一般不要出现在academic essay中,考官已经看烦了。可以用A considerable number of代替。

  2. Everything has two sides/every coin has tow sides

  说了跟没说一样,明显的事实,以后也不要用了。

  3. Recently

  这个词不好。按照他们的说法就是too imprecise,没有一个具体的时间。可以用 In the last 5 years…/since….代替。

  4. There is survey……

  老师是这么说的:has there been?/only say this if you actually know of one 也就是说考官知道这些都是你编的,最好不要用了。

  5. And, because, but

  这三个词我们还是经常会用到.其实最好用in addition, therefore, however等代替。

  6. 不能用vivid 来形容world,vivid可以用来说memories或者是dream之类的。

  7. No one can deny that…/Undoubtedly

  这2个词组太绝对了,用来开头并不合适。其实每个人都能持与你意见相反的态度。

  8. in a word

  很多人会用它来做conclusion。鬼佬的意见是:如果你准备用这个词组来引出你的观点,那你最好用一个词来概括,谁让你是这么写的呢。

  9. Meanwhile don’t use in general academic writing or for task 2—but it is ok for describing a process in task 1

  10. Nowadays

  理由和3差不多,这个词用在文章里显得太普通了,老师的原话是it does not mean very much

  11. It is a well known fact… 最好不要用, 有的考官会扣分。

  12. advantages and disadvantages 换成merits and drawback 和pros and cons

  13. In my opinion, I dis/agree with this

  这是多余的表达. When stating your opinion you follow with a fact 相信大家都能看懂,,就不翻译了。

  14. IELTS文章中千万不能用缩写, 例如I’m 在考场上别犯懒,平时最好也别写缩写,多多注意,养成习惯。

  15. very不能用来形容delicious, lovely, fantastic, wonderful, amazing, gorgeous and huge.

  16. human being MS这个词指的是动物+植物,以后可以用man kind代替。

  以上这些词组,因为不准确也不规范,影响大家获得雅思写作高分。所以,尽量多掌握一些准确的富有学术性的词汇来完成雅思写作才可以获得高分。

雅思写作中要避免其他考生常用的词组的延伸阅读——IELTS考试写作技巧之有效的句子要有重点,并且要突出重点。

  同学们已经对IELTS考试的写作有了比较客观的认识,下面两全其美网校城编辑简单总结IELTS考试写作技巧:

  1. 把重点摆在句首或句尾。

  一般而论,最显眼的位置是在“句尾,其次是在句首,中间的位置最平淡,乏善可陈。例如:

  (1) Incorrect grammar and improper construction invariably distract readers'attention.

  (2) The history of vocabulary is, in many ways, the record of civilisation.

  把重点放在句尾是种“吊胃口”的方法,读者或听者非得读完或听完整句不可。

  2. 在复杂句里,把主句放在从句之后。

  除了名词从句和形容词从句之外,因为它们位置较固定,副词从句中有几种的位置灵活,可以在主句之前出现,

  也可以跟在主句之后。通常我们就把这样的副词从句提前,重点则放在后头的主句,如(3b):

  (3a) I came upon an old classmate when I went to town yesterday.

  (3b) When I went to town yesterday, I came upon an old classmate.

  副词短语更是如此,如 (4b):

  (4a) Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its durability.

  (4b) Beacuse of its durability, steel is commonly used to make knives,razers and other useful tools.

  3. 把较重要或有分量的词语放在后头,如(5b)和(6b):

  (5a) I was delighted and amused by the classical opera

  (5b) I was amused and delighted by the classical opera.

  (6a) That singer's life was tragic and brief.

  (6b) That singer's life was brief and tragic.

  4. 把句子中一系列的项目作逻辑性的排列。例如:

  (7) Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to bed.

  (8) Were you bored with years of study in elementary school, high school and institute of higher education?

  5. 必要时,重复重要的语词或概念。

  例如:

  (9) Jackie enjoys the company of ladies. He likes their beauty, he likes their delicacy, he likes their vivacity,

  and he likes their silence.

  (10) ...the land stretched out without names. Nameless headlands split the surf; nameless lakes reflected the

  nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays.

  6. 尽量用主动说态,因此(11b)比(11a)好:

  (11a) A pedestrian was struck on the head by a flying stone.

  (11b) A flying stone struck a pedestrian on the head.

  7. 适当时候,可用倒装句和平行句,如:

  (12) Seven dwarfs lived here in the centre of the dark forest. → Here, in the centre of the dark forest

  lived seven dwarfs.

  (13) Severity breeds fear; roughness breeds hatred.

  (14) Honesty recommends that I speak; self-interest demands that I remain silent.

  最后,两全其美网校城编辑祝大家能够顺利地通过IELTS考试!


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