新gre写作 句式整理

        一、是非问题分析论证句式

　　1. Whereas other societies look to the past for guidance， we cast our nets forward(面向未来)

　　2. It is the belief in a brighter future that gives us optimism.

　　3. Even these days， when not all progress seems positive ， the belief remains that for every problem there is a rational solution.

　　4. The job of the parents is to give the children every opportunity while they are growing up and then get out of their way.

　　5. What deference people in authority do command is based on their actual powers rather than on their age， wisdom， or dignity.

　　6. In a society that changes as fast as ours， experience simply does not have the value that it does in traditional societies.

　　7. It has taken a long time to convince the public that free enterprise does not mean that a company should be free to pollute the air， foul the rivers， and destroy the forests.

　　8. The assembly line reduced workers to cogs of machinery and made their jobs unutterably boring， but it produced goods fast.

　　9. Food is prepackaged and shopping is impersonal， but the efficiency of the operation produces lower prices and less shopping time.

　　11. In America， there are no such expressions such as in china where “the fat pig gets slaughtered，” or in Japan， where “the nail that sticks out gets hammered down.”

　　12. This freedom from the group has enabled the American to become “Economic Man”—one directed almost purely by profit motive， mobile and unencumbered(不受阻碍的)by family or community obligations.

　　13. Equipped with the money， one can acquire the taste， style， and ideas that mark each class and launch a quick ascent of the social ladder.

　　14. Actually， persons in status societies who are secure in their niches (适当的位置)are allowed more eccentricity than Americans， who rely heavily on signals that other people like them.

　　15. When half the population goes to college， one cannot expect the colleges to maintain the same standards as in countries where only the elite attend.

　　16. Just as not every Japanese is hardworking and deferential to superiors (长者、上司)， not every Chinese is devoted to family， not every American is ambitious or patriotic – or even unsophisticated.

　　17. No one could seriously think that anyone who grows up poor， lives in a bad neighborhood， and attends an inferior school has an opportunity equal to that of someone more favored.

　　18. Americans may not have achieved equality， but at least they aspire to it， which is more than many other nations can claim.

　　19. In many countries， when jobs become available for young people in distant cities， when television begins to dominate home life， when ready – made foods appear in the markets， the culture appears more “American” – although the resemblance could be entirely superficial.

　　20. When the demand for something is greater than its supply， producers and suppliers will sense the possibility of making a profit – the excess of revenues over expenses is the profit.

　　21. As the case illustrates， competition takes four general forms： pure competition， monopoly， monopolistic competition， and oligopoly(少数制造商对市场的控制).

　　22. The classic example of pure competition occurs with a commodity， like wheat or corn， that has so many producers that no one of them can control its selling price.

　　23. A monopoly occurs when one company alone offers a particular food or service and therefore controls the market and price for it.

　　24. Private restaurants serve gourmet food for $70 per person; incentives boosted agricultural production 25 percent and industrial output 80 percent in just three years; farmers are encouraged to raise as much as they can on their own plots， and some become almost rich in the process.(注意本句中分号的使用)

　　25. All these changes in China’s economic life have brought changes in China’s social and cultural life as well， many of which unwanted.

　　二、逻辑问题分析论证句式

　　1 The argument fails to rule out the possibility that a writer engage in both types of writing as well as other types.

　　2. The mere fact that ticket sales in recent years for screenplay-based movies have exceeded those for book-based movies is insufficient evidence to conclude that writing screenplays now provides greater financial opportunity for writers.

　　3It is possible that fees paid by movie studios for screenplays will decrease in the future relative to those for book rights.

　　4. In any event， the advertisement provides no justification for the mutually exclusive choice that it imposes on the writer.

　　5. The argument simply equates success with movie ticket sales， which is unwarranted.

　　6. The author assumes that physical capabilities are the only attributes necessary to operate a motor vehicle.

　　7. Moreover， the author provides no evidence that the realism of color photography is the reason for its predominance.

　　8. This assumption presents a false dilemma， since the two media are not necessarily mutually exclusive alternatives.

　　9. Common sense tells us that a photographer can succeed by working in both media.11. The major problem with the argument is that the stated similarities between Company A and B are insufficient to support the conclusion that Company A will suffer a fate similar to Company B’s.

　　10. Consequently， the mere fact that Company A holds a large share of the video – game hardware and software market does not support the claim that Company A will also fail.

　　11. Thus， the author unfairly assumes that highly – rated public television programs are necessarily widely viewed， or popular.

　　12. While this may be true in some cases， it is equally possible that only companies with products that are already best – sellers can afford the higher ad rates that popular shows demand.

　　13. Admittedly， the vice president’s reasoning linking employee benefits with company profits seems reasonable on the surface.

　　14. One can infer from the survey’s results that a full one – third of the respondents may have viewed the current benefits package unfavorably.

　　15. Lacking more specific information about how these other employees responded， it is impossible to assess the reliability of the survey’s results or to make an informed recommendation.

　　16. It is unlikely that the brief one – week periods under comparison are representative of longer time periods.

　　17. If so， even though 3 percent more accidents occurred after the change， the author’s argument that changing the speed limit increases danger for drivers would be seriously weakened. 18.In addition， while it is true that many voters change their minds several times before voting， and that some remain undecided until entering the voting booth， this is not true of everyone.

　　19 Moreover， the author fails to consider and rule out other factors that might account for proportional decreases in spending on food.

　　20. Without knowing the extent and nature of the damage resulting from the bad publicity or the reason for the violation， we cannot accept the author’s conclusion.

　　21 The author’s proposal is inconsistent with the author’s conclusion about the consequences of adopting an ethics code.

　　22. To begin with， the author fails to consider health threats posed by incinerating trash.

　　23. The author’s conclusion that switching to incineration would be more salutary for public health would be seriously undermined.

　　24. However， this is not necessarily the case.

　　25.The author’s implicit claim that incinerators are economically advantageous to landfills is poorly supported.

　　26. Consequently， unless the author can demonstrate that the city will incur expenses that are not covered by the increased revenues from these projects， the author’s concern about these issues is unfounded.

　　27.First of all， while asserting that real incomes are rising， the author provides no evidence to support this assertion.

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新gre写作 句式整理的延伸阅读——GRE写作技巧详解

 

　　1. gre写作考试有题库：

　　为了达到公平，ETS公布了它考试的所有写作题库，那么为了达到能和native speaker一起竞争，考生应该在考前对所有题目都进行预习(节约考试时的审题时间)，并通过100-150个提纲的写作了解GRE写作的一般结构，通过30-50篇写作来练习自己的写作思路和表达。对题库中的题目越熟练，对考试越有利。

　　2. gre写作考试的评阅是计件工作制的：

　　每个评卷人对你文章的评阅非常快，不可能对每个细节都很仔细地去看。考生应该迎合评卷人的评卷思路，用最规范的结构和最清晰的表达来体现自己的思路：首段要鲜明地提出观点，中间段落层次要拉开，每段的开始应该就是该段的topic sentence。

　　3. gre写作的评分是整体评分(holistic scoring)：

　　首先，从ETS公布的各分数段评分标准看，其评分主要注重以下三个方面：①、逻辑分析能力(要求insightful);②、文章的组织(要求well-organized);③、语言能力(要求standard written English; concise; varied structure等)。

　　4. gre写作两个部分在总分中的权重是一样的：

由于AA的写作不牵涉自己观点的展开，只须指出作者逻辑上的漏洞，因此在经过训练以后，写起来并不困难;而AI的写作需要自己展开自己设立的观点，不但需要逻辑上的洞察能力，还需要论证观点的能力，语言组织的能力，因此对于中国考生来讲比较困难，难以短期内有较大提高。但是这两个部分在总分中的权重是一样的，因此考生的策略应该是尽量提高AI部分的写作能力而力保AA部分满分(或高分)。因为如果AA部分满分的话，AI部分只需争取在4分以上就可以保证整体作文分数在5分以上。