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考研名师王若平点评2008考研英语作文(含大作文范文)

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摘要: 考研名师王若平点评2008考研英语作文(含大作文范文)  2008年的考研英语作文的题目可以用“波澜不惊”来形容,充分体现了命题者一贯稳重的风格。  图画作文中场景是:两个独腿的人在相互配合下前进。一眼就能看 ...

考研名师王若平点评2008考研英语作文(含大作文范文)


  2008年的考研英语作文的题目可以用“波澜不惊”来形容,充分体现了命题者一贯稳重的风格。

  图画作文中场景是:两个独腿的人在相互配合下前进。一眼就能看出它反映的主题是社会的一个时髦话题—“合作”,或者“团队精神”。要说去年图画作文的寓意设计得有一定难度,今年内涵是十分明确的,跑题的人应该是寥寥无几,完全控制在合理的范围内。今年图画作文给人的总体感觉是:主题鲜明,时代感强。

  我记得很清楚,我在年底课堂的板书上写过“team spirit”(团队精神)这个关键词。《“考试虫”八套模拟试卷》中第四(二)卷的作文题目是Cooperation. 现作为范文刊登出来,供大家参考:

  范文:

  Cooperation

  If we want to complete our work effectively and efficiently in this busy, modern world, we must all learn to cooperate with others. As the cartoon shows, if we lose our partner, then we will fail as well.

  This lesson in cooperation may seem rather simple, as most people are taught that they should cooperate when they are children in school. However, many people still make the mistake by the men in the picture: they believe others must fail for their own success. Supposing that a company leader assigns two workers to do a project together, and both of them impatiently are waiting for a promotion. The two believe they must beat their “enemy” to win the promotion. To achieve this they may do things to make their partner in unfavorable position, such as interrupting their work whenever they can. In the end, without realizing it, they have ruined their own project, too. So, for our common benefit, we ought to be cooperative. Additionally, cooperation can save us a lot of time and energy if each person handles the tasks that they do best.

  It can be difficult to be cooperative with someone you dislike. In such a situation, just sit calmly and clear your mind for a minute. Focus on your work, instead of your partner. Perhaps in working together with him, you'll learn that he is a really nice person. Even if this doesn't happen, it's still worth a try.

  全篇244词,稍加调整,就可变成今年作文,这才是真正的“原题命中”!

  今年应用文考的是普通的道歉信,这是我在年底课堂上讲的九种常见书信中的一种。课堂上讲的是李明因弄丢了同学的书而道歉,考试中考的是李明回国不小心带走了房东Bob的音乐CD而道歉,此二者在写作方式和内容上大同小异。无论是应用《万能作文》里的常用道歉信模板,还是直接套用课堂讲义上的范文,都很容易写出今年试卷中的道歉信。

  现列举道歉信常用套语,供同学们对照参考:(选自“考试虫”系列《万能作文》p56-57)

  表示歉意的万能套语:

  I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to…

  Here is my deepest apology for …

  I would like to express my apologies for not being able to…

  提出弥补措施的万能套语:

  I am really sorry for the trouble. Would you mind if I …?

  Would it be convenient for you…?

  请求原谅的套语:

  Will you please accept my apology? I hope our relations can weather…

  如果直接套用课堂讲义上的范文,则更方便:

  Dear …,

  I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have …

  But I am afraid …They are connected with cherished associations which the new ones can never have. And for this … loss,I am to blame. I was so careless with my things. This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future.

  I'm sorry again for the inconvenience.

  Yours truly,

  Liming

  这71个词可直接套用。

  总之,今年作文的主题贴近生活,寓意容易把握,写作难度不大。如果大家方法得当,并做了相应准备,取得好的作文成绩并不难。虽然今年阅读考的略有难度,但和作文部分综合在一起,英语的平均分不会有太大波动。

考研名师王若平点评2008考研英语作文(含大作文范文)的延伸阅读——复习英语要讲究技巧

 一,重视单词。
  从第一天开始复习到考试的前一天,考试大纲词汇就应不离手,因为这是一切的基础。考试大纲是命题专家出题的依据、基础,所以考生一定要重视。背单词时,可以总结同义词、一词多义以及包含“高级”短语的句子,然后跟同桌的研友们对话,或者“厚颜无耻”地主动向他们“炫耀”,同时也坚持参加英语辩论活动,把自己最新积累的词句一一“亮”出,这样考生会感觉记得特别牢固。

  二,日积月累。
  作为一门语言,充满了繁琐与细节的,想一口吃成大胖子是不太现实的,必须耐心地积累“量变”以求“质变”。学习英语的时间安排也是有规律可循的,如果你一天安排3个小时学英语,那么与其一鼓作气学3个小时倒不如改成上下午各1.5小时。持续学习、及时复习才能收到较为理想的效果。可以参照着名的“艾宾浩斯遗忘曲线”来合理安排时间,最大限度地降低遗忘率,以获得较好的学习效果。

  三,研读真题。
  历年考研英语全真试题是了解考研水平的最快途径,也是熟悉命题规律的唯一途径。所以要在老师的指导下分阶段复习考研英语真题。找一个安静的环境,先用一周的时间做一套真题,做完后,对自己的错题先看一下怎么错的,错在哪里,能不能解决。剩下的时间要分析题型,也就是看这些题目是属于细节题、推理题,还是主旨大意题……当复习完十年的真题,建议考生放20天左右的时间,重新再做真题,分析自己的做题思路,考前一个月适当做些高质量的模拟题练练手。另外,希望考生真题至少看三遍。第一遍先做,做完之后归纳总结错题的原因。第二遍主要精读文章解决单词句子翻译。第三遍前两遍的内容都要看。

  四,增加课外阅读。
  课外阅读在考研英语复习中占有重要地位,对提高成绩有很大作用,建议大家订一份《英语世界》杂志,阅读上面的文章,也会有不少收获。如果有条件,看看自己学校图书馆是否有这本书,有的话坚持看,肯定会有收获的!

   希望以上的介绍对2013的考研同学有所帮助,另外,大家在学习英语学习方法时,要从自身实际出发,选择真正适合自己的复习方法。 


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