范文：高中毕业后先工作再上大学的利弊

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摘要: 范文：高中毕业后先工作再上大学的利弊　　Version 107 Some people believe that students who want to attend colleges or universities after graduation from high school should spend one year taking a jo ...

范文：高中毕业后先工作再上大学的利弊

　　Version 107 Some people believe that students who want to attend colleges or universities after graduation from high school should spend one year taking a job to gain work experience or traveling to enlarge their vision. You should use specific reasons to state the advantage and disadvantage of this practice.

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　　Introduction (45 words)

　　It is reported that average families' expenditure on education is increasing.

　　Yet how to educate children in a right way always obsessively bothers us. A

　　practice has been suggested that students should spend one year working or traveling to gain practical experiences before taking tertiary education. topic sentence 1 (14 words)There are some advantages to taking one year to work or

　　travel after high-school education.

　　Supporting sentences: (85 words)

　　In general, high-school graduates are less than 20 years old without professional

　　knowledge. When they take their places in society, only the low-paid or laborious

　　job offers are available. After one year of hardships and humiliations,

　　their desire for being equipped with specialized knowledge would inevitably grow

　　greater, turning into powerful force to drive them on cherishing their further

　　education. Next, travel can enlarge one's vision, and students can apply what they

　　have seen or heard into their college curriculums/subjects, helping them better

　　understand theoretical knowledge.

　　BODY2(topic sentence2 (16 words)

　　On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to working or traveling before going

　　to university

　　Supporting sentences( 102words)

　　First, high-school graduates are too young to distinguish the good from the bad. It

　　is common that Generation Y likes hanging out with friends; they move from one

　　group to another and their friendships change over a period of a few weeks or months.

　　Therefore, in society the probability of getting involved with evildoers is pretty

　　high. It is said that the young are easy to become illegal drugs takers if misleading

　　guidance is conducted. Second, to travel for one year is too expensive for people

　　from all walks of life, not to mention that students' financial sources are chiefly

　　from their parents.

　　(**additional point: Besides, one-year travel means you have to be on a move for a

　　long period from one city to another, even from one nation to another. Eventually

　　you may not be able to calm down to concentrate on your studies after the journey.**)

　　Conclusion 2 (62 words)

　　In conclusion, advantages of working or traveling for a long time before further education are obvious but not doable. In my opinion, to work at a very young age might result a hazardous social life and to travel for one year will increase financial burden to the family, hence to educate children in a row can mould them into sensible human resources.

范文：高中毕业后先工作再上大学的利弊的延伸阅读——IELTS考试复习计划建议

　　同学们已经对IELTS考试的题型分外熟悉了，之后又应该如何有效地进行复习呢?如果在现在的考试中所谓的技巧用到的越来越少，那么解

题思路就显得尤为重要了。就学术类阅读部分，两全其美网校城编辑简单提出几点建议：

　　1. 打印老师的阅读课课件，结合自己课堂笔记把课件在回忆，理解的基础上补充的更加完整，熟读并且努力背诵解题思路。

　　2. 结合已经做过的真题，分析出自己擅长和不擅长的题型，做到心中有数，以应对考场各种情况。

　　有了以上的准备工作，我们可以按照有限的复习时间这样来安排：

　　★ 考试时间：1-2周的同学

　　目标原则：查漏补缺

　　按照题型模块，比如这几天准备攻克"选段意"的题目，那么：

　　1. 先把笔记上这部分的做题思路背下来。

　　2. 其次把剑四，剑五里这个题型已经做过的题目仔细分析，思考为什么曾经做错，从中吸取经验。同时对做对的题目也要分析到位。

　　3. 然后把剑四，剑五里涉及到这个题型剩余的题目，定好时间，按时完成。核对答案，分析错题。在剑四，剑五都以题型的方式处理过之