浅谈雅思口语中关键点的组织能力

　　浅谈雅思口语中关键点的组织能力

　　像描述一种野生动物、你喜欢的一种花、或是一种电器产品等描述性的part 2口语题目，对于许多考生来说主要难点集中在能不能组织好思路和说出足够丰富的内容。事实上，这种描述性的话题的重点在于梳理出几个思路的要点，然后根据这些要点(也就是写在纸上的笔记单词)把能想到的内容串联起来，既可组织成既有条理又有实际内容的part 2发言。以下为一个范例，建议学生不要背诵范文，而是根据关键点来组织出自己的发言。

　　Describe a wild animal

　　Key points: lion, living together, territory

　　I'd like to tell you something about a wild animal that I like a lot, which is lion. I watched an American cartoon movie called ‘Lion King’ when I was little. The movie was so fascinating to me back then, and that probably is the reason why I give a special favor to these big cats.【关于狮子的另一种说法】

　　The lions could usually be found 【被动语态，增加所用句子的多样性。】in the plain area of Africa. The most special thing about lions is that they are the only kind of feline animals who could live together. But, you know, they are aggressive animals who prey on other grass-eating creatures.【用比较简单的单词来表述自己的意思，而不要困在一两个单词上】 So living together could be a challenge for these big guys. And luckily, they came out with some really smart ideas. Roaring and the smell of their urine are adopted to mark the territories of each lion. They always roar a lot before the preying ritual at night as well as at dawn right after they are awake. If someone deliberately or accidentally steps into the lions' territory, they would drive those intruders away at once.

　　Personally, I think the cubs of lion are incredibly 【口语化的说法】cute. However, how do these fluffy little things become powerful predators is a little bit tricky. As they grow up, these baby lions start to learn the basic prey skills from their mothers. When the baby lions grow to a certain age, sometimes the mother lion would let them to be part of the preying process. They would work together as a team. Although the baby lions are not fully qualified for preying yet and they could make mistakes at times, this kind of practice is essential for their future survival. Just as human being, they need to be good workers to really earn a living.

　　在准备一个part 2口语话题之前，准备素材是十分必要的。但是另一方面，在筹集了充足的资料之后，如何把各个内容关键点有条理的组织起来并用相对流畅而多样的句子组织起来，这就成为了广大考生需要重点练习的方面。光靠背诵范文是不够的，还需要练习自己实际谈话和组织语言的能力。

浅谈雅思口语中关键点的组织能力的延伸阅读——IELTS考试写作技巧之有效的句子要有重点，并且要突出重点

　　同学们已经对IELTS考试的写作有了比较客观的认识，下面两全其美网校城编辑简单总结IELTS考试写作技巧：

　　1. 把重点摆在句首或句尾。

　　一般而论，最显眼的位置是在“句尾，其次是在句首，中间的位置最平淡，乏善可陈。例如：

　　(1) Incorrect grammar and improper construction invariably distract readers'attention.

　　(2) The history of vocabulary is, in many ways, the record of civilisation.

　　把重点放在句尾是种“吊胃口”的方法，读者或听者非得读完或听完整句不可。

　　2. 在复杂句里，把主句放在从句之后。

　　除了名词从句和形容词从句之外，因为它们位置较固定，副词从句中有几种的位置灵活，可以在主句之前出现，

　　也可以跟在主句之后。通常我们就把这样的副词从句提前，重点则放在后头的主句，如(3b)：

　　(3a) I came upon an old classmate when I went to town yesterday.

　　(3b) When I went to town yesterday, I came upon an old classmate.

　　副词短语更是如此，如 (4b):

　　(4a) Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its durability.

　　(4b) Beacuse of its durability, steel is commonly used to make knives,razers and other useful tools.

　　3. 把较重要或有分量的词语放在后头，如(5b)和(6b)：

　　(5a) I was delighted and amused by the classical opera

　　(5b) I was amused and delighted by the classical opera.

　　(6a) That singer's life was tragic and brief.

　　(6b) That singer's life was brief and tragic.

　　4. 把句子中一系列的项目作逻辑性的排列。例如：

　　(7) Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to bed.

　　(8) Were you bored with years of study in elementary school, high school and institute of higher education?

　　5. 必要时，重复重要的语词或概念。

　　例如：

　　(9) Jackie enjoys the company of ladies. He likes their beauty, he likes their delicacy, he likes their vivacity,

　　and he likes their silence.

　　(10) ...the land stretched out without names. Nameless headlands split the surf; nameless lakes reflected the

　　nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays.

　　6. 尽量用主动说态，因此(11b)比(11a)好：

　　(11a) A pedestrian was struck on the head by a flying stone.

　　(11b) A flying stone struck a pedestrian on the head.

　　7. 适当时候，可用倒装句和平行句，如：

　　(12) Seven dwarfs lived here in the centre of the dark forest. → Here, in the centre of the dark forest

　　lived seven dwarfs.

　　(13) Severity breeds fear; roughness breeds hatred.

　　(14) Honesty recommends that I speak; self-interest demands that I remain silent.

　　最后，两全其美网校城编辑祝大家能够顺利地通过IELTS考试!