雅思写作的流程图进阶指导
在各种类型的雅思小作文之中，流程图类型的题目对于许多考生而言是比较头疼的题型之一(事实证明，中国考生在遇到流程图写作后的平均分数确实比较低)。而在流程图写作中，有不少考生往往知道自己所写的内容比较空泛，但又不知道如何提高。本文会针对这些普遍性问题进行指导。 主谓宾搭配要适宜 首先，在进行流程图写作时，一定要找清楚所写句子的主谓宾。我们在此仅举《剑6》中的流程图写作为例：
 这2个流程图表达的内容十分简单明了：第一个是关于蚕的生命周期的循环，而第二个则是关于丝绸的制作。 其中所涉及到的词汇并不复杂，大家不会说的名词(幼虫、蚕茧、蛾子、丝线、卵)都已经在图中给出，而在写作中所要做的事情就是把各个主语、对象及动作和时间状语用语言连接起来。听起来并不太困难，不是吗? 但是到具体写作之中，想把句子写得通顺易懂、句式正确，也需要一定量的练习与不停思考才能提高。以上图所示的生命周期为例，每个句子的主谓宾一定要搭配适宜。尤其要注意的是，不要采用中式的写法，从而可能导致所有的词和句子都集结在一起，使句式混乱，从而无法确定真正的主语、谓语和宾语是什么。在下笔前一定要考虑清楚自己所要表达的意思的对象，比如从卵变成幼虫之后，所有动作的主语都要是幼虫，而最后变成蛾子之后，动作的发出者则是蛾子，不再是幼虫了。 灵活应用连接词，合并关系紧密的步骤 如果想取得比较好的分数，能够灵活地应用连接词和有轻重地选择叙述的内容长短和重点都是必不可少的关注要点。 我们举《剑6》中“a very good answer”的范文为例： The first diagram shows that there are four main stages in the life of the silk worm. First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves①. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until② the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge③ from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again. The cocoons are the raw material used for the production of silk cloth. Once selected④, they are boiled in water and the threads can be separated in the unwinding stage⑤. Each thread is between 300 and 900 metres long, which means⑥ they can be twisted together, dyed and then used⑦ to produce cloth in the weaving stage. Overall, the diagrams show that the cocoon stage of the silkworm can be used to produce silk cloth through a very simple process⑧. 全文仅仅不到170个词，非常简洁紧凑。我们在写流程图的题目时虽然做不到如此言简意赅地应用语言，但可以从中学到不少的东西。 流程图的各个步骤之间要做到自然的衔接。我们通常能想到的是采用单句来描述每一个步骤，然后把每个步骤用连接词衔接起来就算完成了。这种方法听起来比较简单，但是得分不会很高，因为考生在写作时的写法过于单调。请大家重点看标号的黑体部分，这些是范文中行文比较出彩的地方，建议大家仔细研究作者对于细节的描写方式。 只要能够进行认真的考试准备，所有考生一定都能在写作方面实现能力的全面提高。最后祝愿所有考生都取得满意的成绩!
雅思写作的流程图进阶指导的延伸阅读——IELTS考试写作技巧之有效的句子要有重点，并且要突出重点
同学们已经对IELTS考试的写作有了比较客观的认识，下面两全其美网校城编辑简单总结IELTS考试写作技巧： 1. 把重点摆在句首或句尾。 一般而论，最显眼的位置是在“句尾，其次是在句首，中间的位置最平淡，乏善可陈。例如： (1) Incorrect grammar and improper construction invariably distract readers'attention. (2) The history of vocabulary is, in many ways, the record of civilisation. 把重点放在句尾是种“吊胃口”的方法，读者或听者非得读完或听完整句不可。 2. 在复杂句里，把主句放在从句之后。 除了名词从句和形容词从句之外，因为它们位置较固定，副词从句中有几种的位置灵活，可以在主句之前出现， 也可以跟在主句之后。通常我们就把这样的副词从句提前，重点则放在后头的主句，如(3b)： (3a) I came upon an old classmate when I went to town yesterday. (3b) When I went to town yesterday, I came upon an old classmate. 副词短语更是如此，如 (4b): (4a) Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its durability. (4b) Beacuse of its durability, steel is commonly used to make knives,razers and other useful tools. 3. 把较重要或有分量的词语放在后头，如(5b)和(6b)： (5a) I was delighted and amused by the classical opera (5b) I was amused and delighted by the classical opera. (6a) That singer's life was tragic and brief. (6b) That singer's life was brief and tragic. 4. 把句子中一系列的项目作逻辑性的排列。例如： (7) Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to bed. (8) Were you bored with years of study in elementary school, high school and institute of higher education? 5. 必要时，重复重要的语词或概念。 例如： (9) Jackie enjoys the company of ladies. He likes their beauty, he likes their delicacy, he likes their vivacity, and he likes their silence. (10) ...the land stretched out without names. Nameless headlands split the surf; nameless lakes reflected the nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays. 6. 尽量用主动说态，因此(11b)比(11a)好： (11a) A pedestrian was struck on the head by a flying stone. (11b) A flying stone struck a pedestrian on the head. 7. 适当时候，可用倒装句和平行句，如： (12) Seven dwarfs lived here in the centre of the dark forest. → Here, in the centre of the dark forest lived seven dwarfs. (13) Severity breeds fear; roughness breeds hatred. (14) Honesty recommends that I speak; self-interest demands that I remain silent. 最后，两全其美网校城编辑祝大家能够顺利地通过IELTS考试! |
