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雅思大作文写作步骤介绍

2015-5-8 09:26| 发布者: ayawei| 查看: 92| 评论: 0

摘要: 雅思大作文写作步骤介绍  雅思大作文写作步骤完全指导:雅思写作部分有2篇作文,要求考生在一小时内完成至少400字的写作任务。由于时间比较短,不少考生因未能合理安排时间,结果没有有效完成任务要求或是未能充分 ...
雅思大作文写作步骤介绍

  雅思大作文写作步骤完全指导:雅思写作部分有2篇作文,要求考生在一小时内完成至少400字的写作任务。由于时间比较短,不少考生因未能合理安排时间,结果没有有效完成任务要求或是未能充分展现自己的英语写作水平。

  写作部分两篇文章的字数要求是不一样的。大作文必须完成250字以上写作任务,而小作文150字以上。根据这一指令,从机械地写字速度来看,考生较为合理的时间分配为大作文40分钟,小作文20分钟。另外,大作文占写作总值的60%,小作文为40%,从这分值的权重来看,时间上2:1的分配也是相当合理的。

  所以,要想成功完成大作文任务一定要把时间控制在40分钟左右,前后不超出5分钟。

  那么如何充分利用这40分钟, 完成一篇基本令人满意的文章呢?

  ◆步骤一:审题(<3 分钟)

  审题是有效完成任务的第一步,也是最关键的一步。从评分标准看,审题的正确与否与"Task Response"有着直接的联系。而在当前模板泛滥,文章千篇一律的大环境下,有效审题是突破六分的一条准绳。不少考生在审题时,要么蜻蜓点水、草草一读,要么只关注题目中词的同义转换。如此读题,都有可能对之后的文章撰写方向造成偏差。而有效的读题方法应为:

  →通读题目,了解大意。

  →细读题目,分析句子间的逻辑关系。

  →再读题目,辨别关键词,区分主题词和限定词,推测考官的出题意图。

  由于大部分考生只作到了读题的第一步,所以出现离题或部分离题的可能性很大。现以2008年11月15日的考题为例:

  There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development (题目为考生回忆,与原题可能有少许出入)

  →通读题目,了解大意。

  当前有越来越多的工人在家里工作,有越来越多的学生在家里学习。这是因为电脑技术越来越容易获得,也越来越便宜了。你认为这是个正面的还是负面的发展趋势?

  备注:题中的accessible有不少考生不理解,对审题的准确性会造成一定影响。

  →细读题目,分析句子间的逻辑关系。

  要把握题目中的句子间逻辑关系,关键是能读懂代词"this"; "it"的具体指代。

  "this"是指第一句话。

  "it"可理解为前两句所呈现的这一现象。为了使文章写作方向更为明确,这里可把it 概括为:the wider usage of computer technology in working or studying from home

  →再读题目,辨别关键词,区分主题词和限定词,推测考官的出题意图。

  主题词:Computer technology in working or studying from home

  限定词:positive or negative

  不容忽视的词:easily accessible and cheaper

  题目信息解构:

  (topic) positive(benefits)

  Computer technology in working or studying from home

  (causes) Negative (drawbacks)

  Easily accessible and cheaper

  对题目做出如上分析,确保撰写的文章能包含以上的信息,审题这关绝对能过。

  以上用时不超过3分钟。

  ◆步骤二:列大纲(<3分钟)

  根据以上的题目解构信息,寻找关键词的下义词和衍生词,根据已有素材确定写作框架。

  如:

  Computer technology:on-line, PC, laptop, broadband

  Working from home: Fashion designer; freelancer; translator; journalist; writer; music composer, artistsStudying from home: on-line course, the disable who are difficult to move; course in the foreign country

  Cheaper: on-line IELTS course --several hundred RMB

  Class IELTS course -- several thousand RMB

  Easily accessible : in city-- at least one PC every house

  Broadband: almost every house; school

  Net bar: almost every neighbourhood

  Outline:

  ☆Introduction:

  Computer technology in home-study and home- work (topic)

  Positive development (opinion)

  ☆Body:

  ★Benefits of studying from home:

  Cheaper--- IELTS course (on-line /class)

  Freer--- white collar for further education in free time

  ★Benefits of working from home:

  Artists(music composer/fashion designer)---- more productive

  Freelancer( translator/journalists)---- more working opportunity

  ★Drawbacks:

  Lack self-control /independence( line-addicts)

  ☆Conclusion: inevitable trend( with self-discipline)

  备注:在实战考试中无需把大纲写得如此详细,但胸有成竹一定会使之后文章的写作如鱼得水。

  ◆步骤三:文章撰写(30-35分钟)

  一般文章为4-5段,平均每段用时5-10分钟

  备注:大作文写作一定要写结论段,以体现文章的完整性。

  ◆步骤四:检查(1-2分钟)

  此时,不宜做大的修改,把笔误的部分改掉即可。

雅思大作文写作步骤介绍  的延伸阅读——IELTS考试写作技巧之有效的句子要有重点,并且要突出重点。

  同学们已经对IELTS考试的写作有了比较客观的认识,下面两全其美网校城编辑简单总结IELTS考试写作技巧:

  1. 把重点摆在句首或句尾。

  一般而论,最显眼的位置是在“句尾,其次是在句首,中间的位置最平淡,乏善可陈。例如:

  (1) Incorrect grammar and improper construction invariably distract readers'attention.

  (2) The history of vocabulary is, in many ways, the record of civilisation.

  把重点放在句尾是种“吊胃口”的方法,读者或听者非得读完或听完整句不可。

  2. 在复杂句里,把主句放在从句之后。

  除了名词从句和形容词从句之外,因为它们位置较固定,副词从句中有几种的位置灵活,可以在主句之前出现,

  也可以跟在主句之后。通常我们就把这样的副词从句提前,重点则放在后头的主句,如(3b):

  (3a) I came upon an old classmate when I went to town yesterday.

  (3b) When I went to town yesterday, I came upon an old classmate.

  副词短语更是如此,如 (4b):

  (4a) Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its durability.

  (4b) Beacuse of its durability, steel is commonly used to make knives,razers and other useful tools.

  3. 把较重要或有分量的词语放在后头,如(5b)和(6b):

  (5a) I was delighted and amused by the classical opera

  (5b) I was amused and delighted by the classical opera.

  (6a) That singer's life was tragic and brief.

  (6b) That singer's life was brief and tragic.

  4. 把句子中一系列的项目作逻辑性的排列。例如:

  (7) Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to bed.

  (8) Were you bored with years of study in elementary school, high school and institute of higher education?

  5. 必要时,重复重要的语词或概念。

  例如:

  (9) Jackie enjoys the company of ladies. He likes their beauty, he likes their delicacy, he likes their vivacity,

  and he likes their silence.

  (10) ...the land stretched out without names. Nameless headlands split the surf; nameless lakes reflected the

  nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays.

  6. 尽量用主动说态,因此(11b)比(11a)好:

  (11a) A pedestrian was struck on the head by a flying stone.

  (11b) A flying stone struck a pedestrian on the head.

  7. 适当时候,可用倒装句和平行句,如:

  (12) Seven dwarfs lived here in the centre of the dark forest. → Here, in the centre of the dark forest

  lived seven dwarfs.

  (13) Severity breeds fear; roughness breeds hatred.

  (14) Honesty recommends that I speak; self-interest demands that I remain silent.

  最后,两全其美网校城编辑祝大家能够顺利地通过IELTS考试!


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