雅思大作文引言段写作技巧 在雅思的引言段中，一般会包括以下三个要素： 一： 对于题目中提出的论述/问题的重述(restatement of the issue) 二： 对于该论述/问题，表明自己的观点(your opinion of the issue) 三： 对于文章的主体段落布局的预先交代(layout of the main body) 其中，要素一和要素二是必要组成部分，而要素三是可选择的组成部分，如果有的话，会使文章看上去条理更清晰，层次更分明。 我们来看下面的例子： We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in businesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits? 这是一篇谈论我们对计算机的依赖性的议论文，主要问题针对的是：这种依赖性是一件好事还是我们应对它感到怀疑?下面我们来看这个引言段的范例： Although no one can deny the fact that computers are transforming our world and our lives in an astonishing way and that we rely on them for our daily existence. We should be aware of their potentially damaging impacts on many aspects of our social life and remain skeptical of the over-computerization of our world which is ardently advocated by some scientists. In my opinion, computers may jeopardize the overall wellbeing of humans in three fundamental ways if we misuse them. 该引言段很好地包含了以上提到的三个要素，现将该段按三要素分解并分析如下： 要素一 重述： Although no one can deny the fact that computers are transforming our world and our lives in an astonishing way and that we rely on them for our daily existence. 分析：以although开头的让步状语从句来进行重述，说明计算机正在急剧地改变着我们的世界以及我们对计算机的日常依赖。注意句型的运用：although no one can deny the fact that….. and that….. 要素二 观点：We should be aware of their potentially damaging impacts on many aspects of our social life and remain skeptical of the over-computerization of our world which is ardently advocated by some scientists. 分析：用We should be aware of。。。and remain skeptical of。。。这样的经典词组来表达作者对计算机潜在破坏作用的情醒认识以及对日益计算机化的世界的怀疑。 要素三 布局： In my opinion, computers may jeopardize the overall wellbeing of humans in three fundamental ways if we misuse them. 分析：用。。。in three fundamental ways来说明如果我们滥用计算机的话，它将对人类的整体福祉造成三个根本性的危害作用。这样的写法就为下文的主体段落作好了铺垫，即主体段应分为三个小段落，每段分别谈论其中一个危害之处。 雅思大作文引言段写作技巧的延伸阅读——IELTS考试写作技巧之有效的句子要有重点，并且要突出重点
同学们已经对IELTS考试的写作有了比较客观的认识，下面两全其美网校城编辑简单总结IELTS考试写作技巧： 1. 把重点摆在句首或句尾。 一般而论，最显眼的位置是在“句尾，其次是在句首，中间的位置最平淡，乏善可陈。例如： (1) Incorrect grammar and improper construction invariably distract readers'attention. (2) The history of vocabulary is, in many ways, the record of civilisation. 把重点放在句尾是种“吊胃口”的方法，读者或听者非得读完或听完整句不可。 2. 在复杂句里，把主句放在从句之后。 除了名词从句和形容词从句之外，因为它们位置较固定，副词从句中有几种的位置灵活，可以在主句之前出现， 也可以跟在主句之后。通常我们就把这样的副词从句提前，重点则放在后头的主句，如(3b)： (3a) I came upon an old classmate when I went to town yesterday. (3b) When I went to town yesterday, I came upon an old classmate. 副词短语更是如此，如 (4b): (4a) Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its durability. (4b) Beacuse of its durability, steel is commonly used to make knives,razers and other useful tools. 3. 把较重要或有分量的词语放在后头，如(5b)和(6b)： (5a) I was delighted and amused by the classical opera (5b) I was amused and delighted by the classical opera. (6a) That singer's life was tragic and brief. (6b) That singer's life was brief and tragic. 4. 把句子中一系列的项目作逻辑性的排列。例如： (7) Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to bed. (8) Were you bored with years of study in elementary school, high school and institute of higher education? 5. 必要时，重复重要的语词或概念。 例如： (9) Jackie enjoys the company of ladies. He likes their beauty, he likes their delicacy, he likes their vivacity, and he likes their silence. (10) ...the land stretched out without names. Nameless headlands split the surf; nameless lakes reflected the nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays. 6. 尽量用主动说态，因此(11b)比(11a)好： (11a) A pedestrian was struck on the head by a flying stone. (11b) A flying stone struck a pedestrian on the head. 7. 适当时候，可用倒装句和平行句，如： (12) Seven dwarfs lived here in the centre of the dark forest. → Here, in the centre of the dark forest lived seven dwarfs. (13) Severity breeds fear; roughness breeds hatred. (14) Honesty recommends that I speak; self-interest demands that I remain silent. 最后，两全其美网校城编辑祝大家能够顺利地通过IELTS考试! |
