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托福写作题材:应该选择怎样的朋友

2015-4-24 15:25| 发布者: ayawei| 查看: 125| 评论: 0

摘要: 托福写作题材:应该选择怎样的朋友  The company you keep says a lot about you. Friends have a big influence over how you feel, think, and behave. Here are five reasons you should be careful who you su ...
托福写作题材:应该选择怎样的朋友

  The company you keep says a lot about you. Friends have a big influence over how you feel, think, and behave. Here are five reasons you should be careful who you surround yourself with:

  你周围的朋友很大程度上地代表着你是个怎样的人。朋友对你有很大的影响,包括你的感受、想法和行为。以下是你应该慎重选择朋友的五个原因:

  1. Strong-willed friends can increase your self-control.

  意志坚强的朋友可以帮助提高你的自制力。

  If you struggle to resist temptation, surrounding yourself with people who possess a high degree of self-discipline can help. A 2013 study published in Psychological Science reports that when people are running low on self-control, they often seek out self-disciplined people to boost their willpower.

  如果你在努力抵抗诱惑,交一些高度自律的朋友会对你有所帮助。2013年在《心理科学期刊》上发表的一项研究表明,当人们自制力差的时候,他们通常会找一些自律的人来增强他们的意志力。

  Since self-control is vital to reaching long-term goals, befriending people with willpower could be the secret to success. Whether you're tempted to skip that workout at the gym, or you're considering blowing this month's budget, spending time with a disciplined friend could boost your motivation to maintain healthy habits.

  因为自制力对达到长期目标非常重要,那么和意志力坚强的人交朋友就是成功的秘诀。无论你是想在体育馆里的健身活动中偷懒,还是想挥霍掉这个月的预算费用,和一个自律的朋友待在一起会激励你去保持健康的习惯。

  2. Fewer friends increases the likelihood you'll take financial risks.

  朋友少容易产生财务风险。

  When people lack adequate social interaction, they're more likely to take bigger risks with money, according to a study published in the June 2013 issue of Journal of Consumer Research. Researchers discovered people who feel lonely or rejected were most likely to take the biggest financial risks.

  据《消费者研究期刊》2013年六月份刊登的一项研究显示,当人们社交活动少时,他们有可能承担更大的财务风险。研究者发现感觉孤单或者感觉被否定的人很有可能会冒最大的财务风险。

  Whether you're dealing with a recent breakup, a fallout with family, or a failed business venture, be aware that your emotions could affect your spending habits. Uncomfortable emotions can increase the chances that you'll behave recklessly, which may have a negative impact on your bank account.

  无论你是最近刚分手、或受家人影响、还是生意败笔,你要知道情绪会影响消费习惯。不安的情绪会使你鲁莽行事,因而影响到你的银行存款。

  3. Too many social media connections can increase your stress level.

  过度使用社交网络会使你压力增加。

  When it comes to social media, "the more the merrier" may not be the best approach. A report from the University of Edinburgh Business School says that more Facebook friends means more stress. Researchers linked an abundance of social media connections to increased anxiety about offending people.

  “多多益善”并不适用于社交网络。来自爱丁堡大学商学院的一份报告显示:脸书上朋友越多,压力越大。研究人员认为大量的社交网络活动会使人过于担心冒犯别人。

  4. Close friends could be the secret to longevity.

  亲密朋友是长寿的秘诀。

  When older adults have close confidants, they're likely to live longer, according to a 2005 study conducted by Australia's Flinders University. After following 1,500 people for 10 years, researchers discovered that people with a large network of friends outlived their counterparts by 22 percent.

  据2005年澳大利亚弗林德斯大学做的研究表明,有密友的老年人很可能会长寿。研究人员对1500人进行了10年的跟踪调查,发现朋友圈很广的人会比其他老年人早逝几率低22%。

  5. Friends can greatly influence your choices.

  朋友对你的选择有很大影响。

  A 2014 study published in the Journal of Consumer Research found that friends often bond by providing one another withmoral support to resist a temptation. However, friends also commonly conspire together to enjoyindulgences. Researchers discovered that when it came to resisting temptations -- like eating chocolate -- sometimes friends were more likely to become partners in crime as they decided to indulge together.

  2014年发表在《消费者研究期刊》上的一项研究发现:朋友通常会给予彼此精神上的支持来抵抗诱惑。然而,朋友也会混在一起放纵。研究者发现相对于抵抗诱惑——比如说吃巧克力——有时朋友更可能厮混在一起成为共犯。

  Your likely to start acting like the people you surround yourself with. Pick friends who make poor choices, and you could get dragged down fast. But, if you choose friends who inspire and challenge you to become better, you'll increase your chances of reaching your goals.

  你的行为有可能受身边朋友的影响。如果你选择的朋友总做出错误的选择,你也很快就会被拖累。但是,如果你选择的朋友总是鼓舞你、挑战你使你变得更好的话,你也更容易达到目标。

托福写作题材:应该选择怎样的朋友的延伸阅读——托福写作是怎样打分的。

  综合写作是托福写作板块中的其中一项。托福考试的写作部分分为综合(Integrated writing)和独立(Independentwriting)两块,这两块分别独立评分,取平均值后得到最终的分数。也就是说,这两个部分各占一半权重,因此应给予相同程度的重视。关于这两部分的了解,强烈建议同学们自己去看看ETS出版的托福考试官方指南(OG),OG里面对于考试形式和评分标准有非常详尽的介绍,有些同学在准备输出端考试(写作或者口语)的时候,居然连评分细则都不看,仅凭自己的主观臆测和对于老师讲解的依稀记忆去打造自己的文章,考不好真的不奇怪。下面,我们就来分析一下托福考试的评分细则。

  综合写作的满分要求是:

  A response at this level successfully selects the important information from the lecture andcoherently and accurately presents this information in relation to the relevant informationpresented in the reading. The response is well organized and occasional language errors thatare present do not result in inaccurate or imprecise presentation of content orconnections。

  大家会发现,这里面的关键词是information和organization,也就是信息量和逻辑,至于语言,并没有提出太多的要求,用词和造句“秋裤”一些没有关系。因此,只要听力和阅读的笔记记得较全,并且能够把听力中的观点和细节表达清楚就可以。需要注意的是,这部分对词数和时间都是有要求的,官方的规定是150-225词,我的建议是180-260词,时限是20分钟。关于summary的结构,一定是四段??introduction+3对detail,不需要conclusion。总体来说,这部分得高分的一定是把听力写得很清楚的同学,事实上听力才是考察的重点,阅读是用来帮助对听力进行理解的,同学们在写听力内容的时候切不可有“这个也要写啊,没必要吧”的想法。另外,阅读的内容在写summary的时候决不可照抄。

  了解了综合写作的评分细则,我们可以列出同学们需要锻炼的能力列表:

  1、 阅读能力

  2、 听力和速记能力

  3、 一定的改写能力

  好了,下面我们来看看应该如何复习综合写作。首先,大家要对自己的阅读和听力能力有一个认识,首选的测试题就是ETS发布的TPO(toefl practice online),大家不妨在复习初期拿来“裸测”一下。对自己的能力有大概认识之后,同学们一定要注意复习方法。很多同学认为自己阅读差就是因为不认识单词,所以拼命背单词;有些同学觉得自己听力差,就花大量时间练习听写。这些方法本身都对能力提高很有好处,但是大家一定要记住,实战才是锻炼能力的最好方式,所以还是希望大家多做全套的综合写作习题,TPO有二十多套,就是很不错的选择。但是TPO有一个问题,没有很规范的范文作为参考,这是为什么很多老师开始在精讲精练班上讲解TPO,以帮助同学们复习。另外,还有一本书值得推荐《新托福考试专项进阶——高级写作》,这是我在自己的单项班上的专用教材,里面的综合写作并不是TPO,但却是托福考试真题还原出来的,而且配有nativespeaker撰写的范文,具备不错的参考价值。

  这里推荐一个复习的方法,分成4个步骤:

  1、首先“裸做”题目,即三分钟阅读,听一遍lecture,然后20分钟写summary。写得不好没关系,接下来需要找出阅读和听力中的硬伤,所谓硬伤就是不认识的单词、不理解的词组、没看懂的句型和也认识也理解也能看懂但是听不出来的单词、词组和句型,统统摘抄到笔记本上;

  2、将阅读材料中的“硬伤”仔细记忆,再细细地读passage,完全读懂为止,如果没有读懂可以参看书后的翻译,接着练习记笔记,这里主要是练习笔头速度和缩写表达能力,尽量积累出定型的缩写表达以在考场上争取时间;

  3、将听力中的“硬伤”仔细记忆,再精听lecture,如果听不清可参看听力原文,然后练习记笔记,可多遍练习,放一遍记一遍,尽量详细而不复杂(信息量要大但是单词不要全拼符号不要复杂);

  4、再次仿真练习,读passage,听lecture,再写summary,然后对书后面的sample answer,一定做到不要遗漏听力中的信息。


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