两全其美网校城

 找回密码
 注册

2015年4月12日托福写作范文

2015-4-14 11:14| 发布者: ayawei| 查看: 102| 评论: 0

摘要: 2015年4月12日托福写作范文  2015年4月12日托福独立写作题目   Providing internet access is as important as other services such as building roads,so the government should offer internet access to all ...
2015年4月12日托福写作范文

  2015年4月12日托福独立写作题目

  Providing internet access is as important as other services such as building roads,so the government should offer internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. 为公民提供网络服务和政府其他的利民政策一样重要,政府应该不惜重金为所有公民提供互联网服务。

  写作范文赏析

  When it comes to broadband internet-that’s the world class kind of network we should have-we’re behind America, Korea, Japan and a whole host of other developed countries. So just like electricity,a road grid or a postal service,internet access with very high-capacity and high-speed should be provided by the government in every city as well as remote areas.

  The logic behind enhanced public internet access is plain. We know that internet as a utility become almost more like a platform that for the next economy just as the postal service ended up being a platform for the integration of the country. But the larger vision is that it's an input into absolutely everything we do,including entertainment, social life, cultural life, economic growth and so on,particularly as economy moves more towards being an information-services based economy. Moreover,we are certainly an agricultural nation. Since future products that don't exist yet can't pay for the services they'll need to thrive, taxpayers need to build the platform in order to prepare for the next economy.

  Second of all,internet access,although being highly government-centric and yet due to the lack of regulation and competition,is usually charged too much and delivered too little by cable company.Most people in most cities don't have a bunch of choices for the internet -they have one choice which is a local monopoly. What happens is that because of deregulation if one cable company occupies the market of entire sector or neighborhood,others will be unable to provide services any more.Since there is only one company has the ability to control that market,it would be a fool not to reap its rewards,discriminate price and make lots of profits,which drives prices up and provide limited access.So,if the state offers internet access,this will not be an issue at all.

  However,some people might argue that a project of this size under political circumstance requires tremendous investments and changes in the way we deliver fundamental infrastructure,and thus is like any daydreams which are impossible to realize.Though such argument sounds certainly reasonable,with fiber penetration moving rapidly ahead,one must think ahead. So, the first step is to find someone who understands this issue and understands that we're falling further and further behind and is concerned about our future as a nation. This requires long-term thinking.

  As I mentioned above,if our government addressed the issue of public internet access, it will be beneficial both to the citizen as an individual and the nation as a whole. Going forward, wider availability of internet access will enable China to become one of the great powers for fields related to science and technology,economy,military,space exploration and among others in the world, and thus will lead the world in the information age.

  作者介绍

  黄晶,山东师范大学英语专业,教学工作中认真细致,锐意进取,因材施教,不留余力,擅长化繁为简;授课方式务实而不乏味,严谨而不失活泼,为人谦和,有亲和力,深受学生喜爱;同时帮助同学们提升逻辑思维能力,从而轻松取胜! “我上课不爱讲笑话,但你也会会心一笑。” “我愿意教最实用的东西,分享我的经验以及心得,与你亦师亦友。”

       2015年4月12日托福写作范文的延伸阅读——托福写作是怎样打分的。

  综合写作是托福写作板块中的其中一项。托福考试的写作部分分为综合(Integrated writing)和独立(Independentwriting)两块,这两块分别独立评分,取平均值后得到最终的分数。也就是说,这两个部分各占一半权重,因此应给予相同程度的重视。关于这两部分的了解,强烈建议同学们自己去看看ETS出版的托福考试官方指南(OG),OG里面对于考试形式和评分标准有非常详尽的介绍,有些同学在准备输出端考试(写作或者口语)的时候,居然连评分细则都不看,仅凭自己的主观臆测和对于老师讲解的依稀记忆去打造自己的文章,考不好真的不奇怪。下面,我们就来分析一下托福考试的评分细则。

  综合写作的满分要求是:

  A response at this level successfully selects the important information from the lecture andcoherently and accurately presents this information in relation to the relevant informationpresented in the reading. The response is well organized and occasional language errors thatare present do not result in inaccurate or imprecise presentation of content orconnections。

  大家会发现,这里面的关键词是information和organization,也就是信息量和逻辑,至于语言,并没有提出太多的要求,用词和造句“秋裤”一些没有关系。因此,只要听力和阅读的笔记记得较全,并且能够把听力中的观点和细节表达清楚就可以。需要注意的是,这部分对词数和时间都是有要求的,官方的规定是150-225词,我的建议是180-260词,时限是20分钟。关于summary的结构,一定是四段??introduction+3对detail,不需要conclusion。总体来说,这部分得高分的一定是把听力写得很清楚的同学,事实上听力才是考察的重点,阅读是用来帮助对听力进行理解的,同学们在写听力内容的时候切不可有“这个也要写啊,没必要吧”的想法。另外,阅读的内容在写summary的时候决不可照抄。

  了解了综合写作的评分细则,我们可以列出同学们需要锻炼的能力列表:

  1、 阅读能力

  2、 听力和速记能力

  3、 一定的改写能力

  好了,下面我们来看看应该如何复习综合写作。首先,大家要对自己的阅读和听力能力有一个认识,首选的测试题就是ETS发布的TPO(toefl practice online),大家不妨在复习初期拿来“裸测”一下。对自己的能力有大概认识之后,同学们一定要注意复习方法。很多同学认为自己阅读差就是因为不认识单词,所以拼命背单词;有些同学觉得自己听力差,就花大量时间练习听写。这些方法本身都对能力提高很有好处,但是大家一定要记住,实战才是锻炼能力的最好方式,所以还是希望大家多做全套的综合写作习题,TPO有二十多套,就是很不错的选择。但是TPO有一个问题,没有很规范的范文作为参考,这是为什么很多老师开始在精讲精练班上讲解TPO,以帮助同学们复习。另外,还有一本书值得推荐《新托福考试专项进阶——高级写作》,这是我在自己的单项班上的专用教材,里面的综合写作并不是TPO,但却是托福考试真题还原出来的,而且配有nativespeaker撰写的范文,具备不错的参考价值。

  这里推荐一个复习的方法,分成4个步骤:

  1、首先“裸做”题目,即三分钟阅读,听一遍lecture,然后20分钟写summary。写得不好没关系,接下来需要找出阅读和听力中的硬伤,所谓硬伤就是不认识的单词、不理解的词组、没看懂的句型和也认识也理解也能看懂但是听不出来的单词、词组和句型,统统摘抄到笔记本上;

  2、将阅读材料中的“硬伤”仔细记忆,再细细地读passage,完全读懂为止,如果没有读懂可以参看书后的翻译,接着练习记笔记,这里主要是练习笔头速度和缩写表达能力,尽量积累出定型的缩写表达以在考场上争取时间;

  3、将听力中的“硬伤”仔细记忆,再精听lecture,如果听不清可参看听力原文,然后练习记笔记,可多遍练习,放一遍记一遍,尽量详细而不复杂(信息量要大但是单词不要全拼符号不要复杂);

  4、再次仿真练习,读passage,听lecture,再写summary,然后对书后面的sample answer,一定做到不要遗漏听力中的信息。


鲜花

握手

雷人

鸡蛋

路过
两全其美网校城,荟萃了著名网院和网校的超过10000门免费和收费网络课程!

新东方托福网络课程推荐>>

新东方托福


最新评论

     
Baidu
中华会计网校 新东方网络课堂 中华会计网校会计继续教育 新东方网校 环球网校 中公网校

小黑屋|手机版|关于我们|两全其美网校城 ( 京ICP备05068258-34 )

GMT+8, 2024-3-29 10:15

Powered by Discuz! X3.4

Copyright © 2001-2021, Tencent Cloud.

返回顶部