考研英语考前30天狂背作文(21)
6Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should: 1. describe the drawing, 2. interpret its meaning, and 3. make your comment. You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. 该文分三段。第一段描述图画并定性说这种做法是极端危险的。第二段从两个方面进行剖析。最后一段表明自己的观点，并提出解决办法。In the picture presented to us, a person is investing all the money in the stock market-he even sells his car and raises a mortgage on his apartment. To me, a bystander, this is an extremely dangerous action. Why has he become so crazy? He must be dreaming of making big money one day, but does he know that it has become exceedingly difficult for individual investors to survive in todays stock market? On the one hand, the market is full of institutional investors who are equipped with not only advanced techniques but also latest information. On the other hand, anyone is told that only a small part of people will make money in the market when he enters the market, but when his mind is full of greedy ideas, how can he carry out careful analysis and comprehensive reasoning so as to make sound judgment? Personally I do not agree with the above choice at all. My suggestion is that anyone who wants to make money should receive professional training and then practice in the virtual market for at least a year. If a person can not do that, he had better leave this place full of danger and risks, for it will often be too late when he realizes that the cost is unbearable. 第一段对图画进行了描述。而后立即对这种做法进行定性，显得相当果断。如果不加这句话，第一段则只有一句，显得有点短了。 第二段首先使用一短一长两个反问句的经典用法，非常有力--他为什么变得如此疯狂?他一定想赚大钱，但是他知道在今天的股市中个人投资者的生存已变得极端困难了吗?而后分两方面谈：先说市场中充斥着兼具技术和信息的机构投资者;而后说每个人进场前都听说只有少数人赚钱，但是当脑中充满贪欲之时，哪里还能用细致分析和充分推理来帮助做出正确的判断呢? 第三段的首句斩钉截铁地表示自己不同意上述的选择。而后提出建议：任何人进入市场前必须经过专业培训，并且在虚拟股市中锤炼至少一年。如果做不到，就应该远离这充满危险的地方。要想在大作文上得到高分，是很不容易的事情。"文似看山不喜平"，在结构和内容达到要求之后，语言上可以作一点变化。该文的第二段共使用了三处反问句，这是一种相当新颖的手法。一般来说，连用两个反问句已经是一种高级写法，主要有两个平行反问句(如均是条件状语从句加反问句)和一短一长两种情形。这里用了三个反问句，与看到图中人物极度不理智的做法后的一吐为快的心情是相吻合的。 7Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should: 1. describe the drawing, 2. interpret its meaning, and 3. make your comment. You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. 该文可分三段来写。第一段描述图画。第二段分析该图画所代表的现象。第三段谈解决问题的办法。I am sure that any one of you will be as shocked as me while looking at the two pictures: a person at the crossroads wants to know the right road to Li village, but only after he puts a coin into the slot does the signpost begin to point directions. What a genius design-we can expect that after some time a large sum of money will be collected with little effort. The above pictures remind us of a common phenomenon in the present society. Some government departments try in a hundred and one ways to collect money by inventing different names. Obviously, they put economic interests in the first place and forget the promise to work for the public benefits. To prevent such unpleasantness from happening again, laws should be established to standardize the various expenses of the government in the first place. When their rights and obligations become transparent, common people will realize whether an expense is reasonable or not. Moreover, a supervisory mechanism should be set up as soon as possible-only under the joint efforts of the mass media and all citizens, can we have a society of fairness and justice. 第一段描述图画，将两图的对比突显了出来。 第二段首句是段落统领句。第二句说有些政府部门千方百计巧立名目来捞钱。第三句说他们将经济利益放在首位，忘了为公众服务的承诺。 第三段首先讲应立法来规范政府收费。次句说当权利和义务变得透明时，普通人会知道某项收费是否合理。第三句说应尽快建立监督机制--只有媒体与公众同心协心，我们才能拥有平等与公正的社会。双图的情形总体上比单图少，描述时应注意突显对比或时间的接续。将图中事件与某种社会现象建立联系，是非常关键的步骤。这种联系有时不是唯一的，如2003年真题中的花朵就既可以指对孩子的教育，也可以指全球经济一体化下的某些国内企业，而这两种写法都可以得到很高的分数。大家不妨将读图的实践做一记录，看看哪些理解对了，哪些理解有偏差，经过这样的训练，准确率将大大提高。 8Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should: 1. describe the picture; 2. interpret the meaning of the picture; 3. make your comment. You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. 这幅图画主题鲜明，不难确定文章的主题是"乱穿马路"。在思考之后，我们决定分为四段来写。第一段描述图画。第二段说明该现象带来的后果。第三段说明解决该问题的办法。最后一段是结论。The present picture highlights several people who are crossing the street while the red light is on. It is quite obvious that the drawer wants all of us to think about the serious problem of jaywalking in our society. The jaywalking phenomenon will bring many unfavorable consequences. First and foremost, it will increase the incidence of traffic accidents and thus cause the loss of lives and property. Moreover, common people are likely to copy the action of just a few people who defy the traffic rules. Finally, if this matter is not properly settled, it will pose a threat to the city traffic as a whole. It is high time that we called on the efforts from all sides to deal with this problem properly. For one thing, the government should improve the design of traffic lights so as to make the operation more reasonable. For another, every citizen should behave himself first and help advise others not to jaywalk. Finally, the mass media should also play a positive role in helping people realize the importance of abiding by traffic rules. No matter whether this problem is a natural result of social development, it is important that we find a satisfactory solution to it in this social transformation era. 第一段有两句话，第一句是对图画的描述，第二句说明了"乱穿马路"的主题，对下文的展开起到了承上启下的作用。 第二段讲的是该现象导致的不良后果，共有三点。一是会增加交通事故的发生率，从而导致生命与财产的损失。句中incidence指的是"发生率、发病率"。二是大部分人可能会在一小部分人的影响下不遵守交通规则，句中defy表示"不服从、公然反抗"。三是会给城市交通整体上带来威胁。 第三段写解决问题的办法，共有四句话。第一句是常用的套句，而后分三个方面说。首先是政府应改良信号灯的设计。其次是每个公民应当从自己做起，然后再劝说他人。最后，媒体应该帮助人们意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。 最后一段是结语，说不论这个问题是否是社会发展的自然结果，我们都应当在这个社会转型阶段给这个问题找到令人满意的解决方法。我们在看到图画和提纲后，应立即决定这篇文章该分几个段落来写。主题确定后，我们发现这是个令人担忧的社会问题，所以可以采用将二、三段写成原因和解决办法的常见写法。
考研英语考前30天狂背作文(21)的延伸阅读— —2014考研英语作文必背十大模板
考研英语作文，你是选择背模板还是提升英语写作自己写?两方面见解相持不下，不过对于英语复习时间不够充足和备考时间不够的同学，模板想必是少不了的。 1. 图画作文 It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(图画主题)， which is ______________(进一步的说明)。 He seems to be saying that_______________(给出细节)。 In my opinion， ___________(个人阐述)。 This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群体，如the whole of the human race)。 Therefore， it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________(问题所在)。 One the one hand， we must _________________(建议一)。 It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(进一步说明)。 On the other hand， ________________(建议二) Only in this way can we___________(展望前景)。 2. 图表作文 The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________(图表主题)。 The first thing we notice is that_______________(图表最大特点)。 This means that as __________， _________________(进一步说明)。 We can see from the statistics given that _______________(图表细节一)。 After ving_________(细节一中的第一个变化)， the _____Ved+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化)。 The figures also tells us that_________________________(图表细节二)。 (数据位置，如In the second column)， we can see that ____________accounts for _______(进一步描述)。Judging from these figures， we can draw the conclusion that___________(结论)。 The reason for this， as far as I am concerned is that_____________(给出原因)。 / It is high time that we Ved(发出倡议) 3. 利弊型作文 Recently the issue of whether or not______(讨论话题) has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. There are two major arguments that can be made for_________. For one thing， __________can bring ____ to_____________(优点一)。 For another， it is widely hold that people usually ____when ________________________________(优点二)。 But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to__________， among which are ____________(列举缺点)。 For instance， it can be __________to _____________(举例说明)。 In addition， many people find it ________(形容词)to _______________(第二个缺点) When asked to __________， I tend to ____________. This is because I _______________(原因一)。 Furthermore， _______________________(原因二)。 Finally， ______________(原因三)。 4. 展望未来型 The effects ___________ has produced on____________ can be boiled down to two major ones.First ， __________________(影响一)。 More importantly， ________________(影响二)。 Hence， I believe that we will see a ____________(提出展望)/ Nevertheless， I do not think we will see a ______(或反面展望) There are numerous reasons why ____， and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here. The first is that the more(比较级)_____， the more (比较级)。 In addition， we all aGREe that________________________(第二个原因) 5. 告示 You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement. Chinese-Speaking Contest January 19， 2008 To improve students„ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities， the Students‟ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (26 January) at the Students„ Auditorium. Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest. the Students„ Union Department of Chinese Language and Literature 6. 职业道德 the cartoons vividly depict people in expanding numbers are engaged in open and rampant cheating in business. In the first drawing， a boy has no courage to have dinner in front of delicious foods in that there may exist pesticide pollution or poisonous elements in the foods. In the second picture， the administrative office， salesmen， breeding families and forage shops are laughing at the hanging of a poisonous duck. Professional dishonesty has a very damaging effect. In the first place， since cheating in business reveals the moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness of those businessmen who engage in it， the dishonest practice will ultimately exerts a perverse influence on the whole society. In the second place， it not only puts honest businessmen at a competitive disadvantage， encouraging those who did not cheat to adopt similar practices later， but undermines the very foundation of professional ethics in business. It is often painful to impose sanctions in a specific case. But it is worthwhile. For one thing， to eliminate professional dishonesty thoroughly， serious forms of punishment for a willful offense—a suspension of the offender from business—should be applied. For another， since the incentives to engage in cheating in business are mainly due to a lack of adequate precautions， drastic actions should be taken to prevent one form of cheating or another. 7. 投诉信 Directions： You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting and has parties in the room. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons. Dear Sir or Madam， I am writing to express/air dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding accommodation. I would prefer to move into a single room next semester， as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient. I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate„s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing， his friends are constantly visiting him; for another， he regularly holds noisy parties. To solve this problem/surmount this difficulty/improve this situation/crack this hard nut， I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned. I am sure you will aGREe that the only solution for me is to move into a room of my own. Therefore， I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me， preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible. Yours sincerely， Li Ming 8. 网络问题 In recent years， people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet. As is vividly depicted in the picture， it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line， either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work„s needs. Actually on-line visiting has become a routine activity in our everyday life. However， it seems rath er ironic to use a chain instead of normal wire to connect with the mouse in this picture. The exaggerative and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet. Discussion on the duality has become very popular in newspapers or in people„s chats. On the one hand， no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life. People from all walks of life are benefiting considerably from its powerful function of information communication. But on the other hand， a GREat many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle. Cyber-living resembles the experience of looking constantly into a kaleidoscope which displays both colored patterns and illusions. Such a waste of time inevitably leads to their failure in their life and work. Accordingly， it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. For one thing， college students in expanding numbers get on line every day to learn the news， to study English by registering for web courses， to exchange information through e-mails with their net friends and to download their favorite music， FLASH， film and pictures. Being veteran on-line shoppers， they frequently purchase books， CDs at much lower prices. For another， once indulged in the fictitious world， people can barely concentrate on real life. Consequently， many students just chat on line or play computer games immoderately everyday， skipping many essential classes. After all， Internet is invented to enrich our life， to connect you and me， and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain. 9. 环境问题 the pictures symbolically illustrate pollution is becoming increasingly serious around the globe. In the first cartoon， a man is scorching the earth on a chimney. In the second one， a famous ancient Chinese poet， Wang Bo is astonished by the heavy smoke poured by chimneys into the air and dirty river polluted by a factory. We are informed that “the autumn river is the same color with the sky”。 the drawer is sending a message about the significance of the need for everyone to fight against the danger of environmental pollution. There is no denying that the industry is indications of civilization， proGREss and development. Unfortunately， as industry develops， so will the number of factories， and the amount of industry pollutants. We are so development-oriented that we almost can sacrifice our blue sky and pure water in order to obtain a little material gain. As a consequence， it is imperative for us to take drastic actions. On the one hand， the factories should be equipped with devices which can dispose of waste gas and water so as to prevent them from polluting our planet. On the other hand， there should be an increasingly loud voice from the public for firm actions against poisonous gas sent off and unhealthy water polluted by factories. 10. 提纲式议论文 Directions： A. Title： Air Travel B. Time limit： 40 minutes C. Word limit： about 200 words D. Your essay should be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2. E. Your essay should be based on the information given below. 现在许多人愿意乘飞机旅行。随着我国民航事业的迅速发展，全国各大城市兴建了许多现代化的机场。乘飞机旅行有许多长处(方便、快捷、省时、舒适等);但是，空中旅行也有许多不足之处(机票价格贵，有的旅客不适应空中旅行，常常感到身体不适，甚至有人还担心发生空难)。请你简单阐述上述两个方面。最后请你说明你的看法。 ( Composition for reference only ) Many people prefer to travel by air. This is because air travel has some advantages. In the first place， airplane， the miracle created by man， is the fastest means of transport. It takes the least time for one to travel by air from one place to another. Secondly， traveling by air is convenient and comfortable. Friendly air hostesses are affectionate and considerate. They look after passengers all the way to their destinations. Moreover， on long distance flights there are films and music for people to entertain themselves. As a popular saying goes， “Everything has two sides .” The same is true of air travel. It has some disadvantages， too. For one thing， air travel costs a GREat deal. The average Chinese are not rich enough to afford expensive air fares. So they prefer to take trains， which save a lot of money. For another， although passengers are assured of their safety， they are still worried about it during the journey because flying always involves more or less risk. As far I am concerned ， the advantage mentioned above exceed the disadvantages. If I were given choice between traveling by train， I would certainly prefer the former. For me， time is money and it is the most important thing I have to take into consideration whatever I do. (216 words) |
